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Island Sunset
She’s got lustful eyes
Hiding behind an angel face
Gently rubbing her thighs
Tender skin softest lace
One night of seduction
Could last a lifetime
Pleasure the only function
For these partners in crime
Our bodies dance electric
Closer towards release
Flowing in divine metric
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
Hiding behind an angel face
Gently rubbing her thighs
Tender skin softest lace
One night of seduction
Could last a lifetime
Pleasure the only function
For these partners in crime
Our bodies dance electric
Closer towards release
Flowing in divine metric
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
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Re. Island Sunset
19th Jun 2024 4:11am
I love how you tied in the island theme with the levee's. Also putting in music tempo was a nice touch. Fia xoxo
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Re: Re. Island Sunset
19th Jun 2024 4:30am
Re. Island Sunset
19th Jun 2024 6:30am
Would make apt reading in a place like New Orleans:
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
Tempo begins to increase
Fulfilling the deepest ache
Bodies glistening with sweat
When our levee's break
Underneath an island sunset
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Re: Re. Island Sunset
20th Jun 2024 2:37am
Re. Island Sunset
19th Jun 2024 7:01am
'' She’s got lustful eyes
Hiding behind an angel face ''
Eyes are the windows to the soul...
This is some fantastic writing
Much respect
Naaj
Hiding behind an angel face ''
Eyes are the windows to the soul...
This is some fantastic writing
Much respect
Naaj
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Re: Re. Island Sunset
20th Jun 2024 2:38am
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Re: Re. Island Sunset
29th Sep 2024 3:03am
Thanks so much for your kind words and support, Dreamz. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Appreciate you.
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