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Bird
To be a bird
The goal is to learn how to fly
Not to sink down quickly to the ground
As others walk on by
You must catch the wind
soar and swoops
Doing all these magnificent tricks
above the roofs
Life in any form
Is difficult to navigate
To adapt and change
To avoid unnecessary hate
I like being that bird
If only in my mind
See where the wind takes me
Wherever I go I'll be just fine.
The goal is to learn how to fly
Not to sink down quickly to the ground
As others walk on by
You must catch the wind
soar and swoops
Doing all these magnificent tricks
above the roofs
Life in any form
Is difficult to navigate
To adapt and change
To avoid unnecessary hate
I like being that bird
If only in my mind
See where the wind takes me
Wherever I go I'll be just fine.
Author's Note
This is just another random thought.
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Re. Bird
14th Jun 2024 5:16pm
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14th Jun 2024 5:17pm
Re. Bird
14th Jun 2024 5:44pm
I feel the flow in your words, like an ebb tide and return of the wave, simpley calm
Nice bird metaphor and analogy..Fia..
happiness and success
Nice bird metaphor and analogy..Fia..
happiness and success
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Re: Re. Bird
15th Jun 2024 5:38pm
Thank you poeticdelight. I was looking at the birds fly freely and my mind wondered off.
Re. Bird
Anonymous
14th Jun 2024 5:55pm
Your random thoughts produce good poetry, Fia. Keep it up. :)
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14th Jun 2024 8:01pm
Re. Bird
14th Jun 2024 5:56pm
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14th Jun 2024 8:02pm
Re. Bird
15th Jun 2024 2:38pm
Big big LOVE!!!!
I love how you tied a birds flight into navigating life. 🐦
I love how you tied a birds flight into navigating life. 🐦
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Re. Bird
15th Jun 2024 4:29pm
I echo D-Bear, this metaphor is just right. It’s freeing and fun, but it’s deeper than it looks. Great work.
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15th Jun 2024 4:30pm