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YOU TURN ME ON
YES
I freely admit with
all sincerely and honesty
that YOU turn me on.
YOU
turn me on not
with your amazing body,
not with your passionate
and soft kisses...
YOU
turn me on not with
daring to take us places
that are new and viewed
by some as taboo.
YOU
turn me on not by
your perfect poetry
or magical use of words.
YOU
turn me on totally
by just BEING YOU.
It is from this core YOU
that all the perfection
and wonders flow.
THANK YOU
for being the REAL YOU.
I freely admit with
all sincerely and honesty
that YOU turn me on.
YOU
turn me on not
with your amazing body,
not with your passionate
and soft kisses...
YOU
turn me on not with
daring to take us places
that are new and viewed
by some as taboo.
YOU
turn me on not by
your perfect poetry
or magical use of words.
YOU
turn me on totally
by just BEING YOU.
It is from this core YOU
that all the perfection
and wonders flow.
THANK YOU
for being the REAL YOU.
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Re. YOU TURN ME ON
30th May 2024 4:15pm
This poem my friend is beautiful and sincere, and about its whimsical humour as to the way you show your admiration to the one concerned.......simple and nice.....
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Re: Re. YOU TURN ME ON
30th May 2024 4:17pm
Thanks for your gracious comment, I appreciate it very much. have a great write day. Hugs and love, Oral
Re. YOU TURN ME ON
30th May 2024 4:54pm
Ok we get it…. You’re turned on this morning… but who is she ?! She must be something extraordinary … now I’m turned on just thinking about her and we haven’t even met… wow
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Anonymous
30th May 2024 9:19pm
It's beautiful ✨✨
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30th May 2024 9:22pm
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30th May 2024 11:29pm
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Re. YOU TURN ME ON
31st May 2024 11:53am
I utterly enjoyed the thoughts expressed without the deluge of flowery words. You kept it very real. Terrific write!
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31st May 2024 2:08pm