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bottlecap: hold the burrito...
taco Tuesday
watermelon margarita warming my insides
& another on the way
I'm studying the menu
thinking about trying something different today
there's a lot of options before me
question is...
what is my hunger
in this tequila tempered mood
& then I see it
dead center on the menu
special of the day
sending me to another place
picturing images not listed on the page
& your voice
curled around my ear
softly bludgeoning my senses
as you whisper your intentions
triggering a sudden...
...thorough dampening
& don't you even pretend
you don't remember what you said
spread there hot & spicy
just the way you like
want this, baby
cuz thanks to you...
...& that...word...
it's burned into my memory
thighs drenched
soooo...
how about it...
...smothered
I'm sure it must mean something...don't ask...
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Re. bottlecap: hold the burrito...
29th May 2024 12:48pm
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29th May 2024 9:46pm
Haha, I know it does...amazing how an innocent word stirs not so innocent thoughts...
Re. bottlecap: hold the burrito...
29th May 2024 12:51pm
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29th May 2024 9:47pm
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29th May 2024 1:47pm
Re: Re. bottlecap: hold the burrito...
29th May 2024 9:48pm
I don't know why they had to use that word on the menu...oh the images...
Re. bottlecap: hold the burrito...
29th May 2024 1:48pm
So, I am ever so curious what was on the menu, which led to this steamy piece.
Or was it "special of the day"? (and now my senses are triggered too, lol)
Awesome piece, dear sis, you made the temperatures rise in here 💖
Or was it "special of the day"? (and now my senses are triggered too, lol)
Awesome piece, dear sis, you made the temperatures rise in here 💖
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29th May 2024 9:50pm
The special was smothered burrito but the mind took a 45° turn & landed me in a whole other...meal idea. I love me some heat, sis! 💖
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29th May 2024 2:05pm
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29th May 2024 9:50pm
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29th May 2024 7:06pm
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29th May 2024 9:51pm
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29th May 2024 7:25pm
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29th May 2024 9:52pm
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29th May 2024 9:44pm
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31st May 2024 00:51am
This is fun and flirty - just like watermelon margaritas!! hahahah
Cheers to smothered.
Truely fun to read:)
And well, I'm partial to Mexican. hehehe
Cheers to smothered.
Truely fun to read:)
And well, I'm partial to Mexican. hehehe
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Re: Re. bottlecap: hold the burrito...
4th Jun 2024 1:30am
I'm pretty partial to Mexican food! My spice meter is tragic next to my daughter's though. 🔥 Thank you so much!
Re. bottlecap: hold the burrito...
2nd Jun 2024 2:33am
As a spicy bitch this definitely resonated with me every way even with everything inbetween the lines of this poem, which is what I love most the 'what isn't said' it takes you there and only the baddest and spiciest of bitches will understand the heat of it or what lies beneath it 🌶️
That's what I admire most about your poetry, you don't do erotica often but you never bring the ideas to surface, you let the reader interpret in their own way, you allow them to go to their own places in their own minds, I miss that shit, long live the unsaid.
.... Now where's that black bean burrito 🌯
Kind Regards,
-A
That's what I admire most about your poetry, you don't do erotica often but you never bring the ideas to surface, you let the reader interpret in their own way, you allow them to go to their own places in their own minds, I miss that shit, long live the unsaid.
.... Now where's that black bean burrito 🌯
Kind Regards,
-A
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4th Jun 2024 1:31am
This is literally an epic comment! That black bean burrito is coming right up! 🌶🌯🔥 Thank you so much, A!