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Octopuss
it feels like he
has four hands
at least a few
tongues while
i lose track of
time of what
parts are his
and are mine
i surrender to
the pleasure
he brings me
let myself go
slowly drift off
float like clouds
in slow motion
he is merciless
takes me further
over mountains
angelical fields
until i reach my
peak shatter into
vulvanic avalanches
has four hands
at least a few
tongues while
i lose track of
time of what
parts are his
and are mine
i surrender to
the pleasure
he brings me
let myself go
slowly drift off
float like clouds
in slow motion
he is merciless
takes me further
over mountains
angelical fields
until i reach my
peak shatter into
vulvanic avalanches
Author's Note
Chemistry like this is rare.
...and I'm very fortunate...
https://youtu.be/LCJblaUkkfc
...and I'm very fortunate...
https://youtu.be/LCJblaUkkfc
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Re. Octopuss
23rd May 2024 2:25pm
This speaks to a passion so intense that the lovers cannot hold back from their physical expression.
Very nice.
Very nice.
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23rd May 2024 3:14pm
Re. Octopuss
23rd May 2024 2:39pm
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23rd May 2024 3:16pm
Re. Octopuss
23rd May 2024 3:52pm
You are very fortunate. Love the way you lead us through this. Lovely Fia xoxo
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24th May 2024 8:26am
Re. Octopuss
23rd May 2024 4:02pm
Re: Re. Octopuss
24th May 2024 8:28am
That's a huge compliment. Thanks heaps for your comment & for taking her home, sis 💖
Re. Octopuss
23rd May 2024 5:53pm
Re: Re. Octopuss
24th May 2024 8:32am
Thanks heaps for your comment & for saying the picture is perfect, I appreciate it :-)
Re. Octopuss
24th May 2024 2:57am
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24th May 2024 8:34am
Oof, I'm not sure, pinterest? It took me a while to find it, glad you think this is amazing :-)
Re. Octopuss
24th May 2024 12:41pm
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24th May 2024 1:00pm
Re. Octopuss
24th May 2024 1:57pm
When I saw the title I was like I must know more, cool poem girl, I can dig it.
LJ
LJ
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Re: Re. Octopuss
24th May 2024 2:05pm
Re. Octopuss
Wow !
That is the way paranormal and/or supernatural *love* works.
That's the way one feels it. Just like tentacles holding both men and women intimate zones.
And you seem to have a gift for that.
Congrats !
That is the way paranormal and/or supernatural *love* works.
That's the way one feels it. Just like tentacles holding both men and women intimate zones.
And you seem to have a gift for that.
Congrats !
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Re: Re. Octopuss
26th May 2024 5:16am
How to reply to a comment like this? Your "Wow" says everything and yes, I am blessed to have found a connection like this, thanks heaps for your amazing comment :-)
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27th May 2024 00:30am
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