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Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
. . . someone like me, sultry and carefree,
becomes excited in tender moments,
simply
anticipating spring, the silhouette of summer
warmth leaves me breathless, and
seasons never cease to be expressive and please
perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities,
beyond this sweet ache
do you understand the feeling of being windswept,
how i long to escape and frolic ?
( to linger in days of seagulls and sand,
salty air dancing upon luscious lips,
. . . sighing as the moonlight twists its fingertips
through my dirty blonde hair -
tangling its glow, softly and slow
as waves welcome me, in pure ecstasy )
perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities,
beyond this sweet ache
- - under a pink umbrella basking,
absorbing the radiant atmosphere,
with creamy coconut lotion on sun-kissed skin,
while sculpting sandcastles unevenly, as the tide moves in - -
*sand in sandals*
even the wind, with its soothing melody,
moves distant clouds my way, in hopes to soothe me
perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities,
beyond this sweet ache
. . . to finally feel, only you
Author's Note
~ A Romantic Scribble ~
(Longing for warmth)
. . . The season, or your touch ? ? ?
Perhaps both
(Longing for warmth)
. . . The season, or your touch ? ? ?
Perhaps both
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Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
18th May 2024 6:25pm
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18th May 2024 9:37pm
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19th May 2024 1:42am
What a visual you have created here. Whoever is the one in your thoughts is very lucky but also very unlucky if he isn't there with you.
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19th May 2024 2:57am
Thank you. The longing within is very real, and while the ache is strong, this connection is only felt through a whisper of words. Lucky to feel such closeness, even if through the wind. 💙
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19th May 2024 3:03am
I too understamd and feel that ache. The connection is an amazing thing. I really like the idea of a closeness. Its a very comforting thought.
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19th May 2024 3:12am
Amazing indeed, how a connection can be made, even through a soft whisper. It's a ' sweet ache, ' because the feeling is wonderful, yet it hurts at the same time.
Closeness is something I crave . . .
Closeness is something I crave . . .
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Yes. There is something sweet about the ache. Its a good pain. A pain of desire and longing. Something about that, having someone to crave is better than being hopelessly alone in the darkness. I believe that we can have that closeness that we seek.
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Re: Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
19th May 2024 3:31am
I completely agree !
And, it's certainly possible to have that kind of closeness.
And, it's certainly possible to have that kind of closeness.
Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
19th May 2024 2:04am
Dear BC,
A perfect romantic scribble! Made me yearn for the ocean and soft sand. I really enjoyed the feeling of having the healing benefits of the sea removing all the toxic yuck from my soul and rejuvenating my spirit. Lovely write. H🌷
A perfect romantic scribble! Made me yearn for the ocean and soft sand. I really enjoyed the feeling of having the healing benefits of the sea removing all the toxic yuck from my soul and rejuvenating my spirit. Lovely write. H🌷
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19th May 2024 3:06am
Dear Honoria, the way waves kiss the sand, is magical; along with sensual and inviting. Your thoughts are beautiful in every way. So wonderful that you're able to feel the emotions within. Thank you for sharing how the sea soothes your soul. My best to you. 🌺
Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
19th May 2024 3:19am
Nice to read this after a long ass fkn winter. For me it Capture the feeling of summer very well 🤘
Nice writing.
Nice writing.
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Re: Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
19th May 2024 3:29am
Yes, it's time for some warmth ! Sun kissing the skin, wild waves and a whispering wind.
Thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile 😊
Thank you. Your thoughts bring a smile 😊
Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
21st May 2024 1:16am
Having sex on the beach is really hot. Then you have a sex on the beach drink. Keep on writing.
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29th May 2024 2:35am
Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
Very nice...
Looking for innovative directions in romantic and peaceful moments.
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perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities *beyond* the feeling of being windswept...
Looking for innovative directions in romantic and peaceful moments.
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perhaps i’ll imagine the possibilities *beyond* the feeling of being windswept...
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Re: Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
16th Jun 2024 3:51am
Keep looking, Marks. : )
You'll find what you seek, beyond those beautiful moments.
Just remember, anything is possible.
You'll find what you seek, beyond those beautiful moments.
Just remember, anything is possible.
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17th Jun 2024 2:53am
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Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
22nd Jun 2024 5:13pm
Beautiful piece! The excitement for spring and summer is vivid, capturing the breathless joy of these seasons. The phrase "to finally feel, only you" hints at a deeper personal connection or fulfillment, which is beautifully conveyed!
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Re: Re. Sand, Sun-Kissed and Sandals
5th Jul 2024 11:57pm
Thank you ! I love both seasons, so I wanted to curl my thoughts around them in such a beautiful, yet playful way. That phrase has two meanings and you've found the connection. Your kind words bring a smile to my heart. : )