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Mmmmmm
Her kisses hugged
my soul like hot molasses
dripped on ice-cream,
melting me without resistance,
Published 16th May 2024
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Yes this is brilliant.
I often have to remind writers that less can be better than more.
Richard
I often have to remind writers that less can be better than more.
Richard
