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secret lives of stars
take my hand
feel
three squeezes,
because
let's slip
between
unseen spaces
glow dreams
from wishes sent
wrap ourselves
sealed in perfect
warmth
safe, together
take harbor
there
become illumination
amidst all that agonizing
darkness
is how heartbeat
tender-stokes heartbeat
where our origins
share a reality
find strength,
life
and a faith
in rare magic
a warm smile,
when time
shows hands
in nonlinear reflections
[how beautifully neverending!]
to gloriously merge
as colliding stars
left forever smoldering
..... across the evening sky
Author's Note
© Blu2024
lost my poetic juju for a spell... this is a small attempt at finding a way back...
lost my poetic juju for a spell... this is a small attempt at finding a way back...
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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- Edited 8th Jan 2025 8:45am
15th May 2024 11:39pm
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Re: Re. secret lives of stars
💫 Missed this place and even more, I missed my pen being full of poetic ink .... Hopefully I can change that going forward.
Thank you muchly for those heartfelt and very kind words, T
I'm trying to invest a bit of energy back in myself, in hopes of recharging/rekindling .... Crossing my fingers it does.
Glad you felt a tiny bit of magic, I'm so grateful you're still here with me and that you did. ✨
Much love,
🌹B
Thank you muchly for those heartfelt and very kind words, T
I'm trying to invest a bit of energy back in myself, in hopes of recharging/rekindling .... Crossing my fingers it does.
Glad you felt a tiny bit of magic, I'm so grateful you're still here with me and that you did. ✨
Much love,
🌹B
Anonymous
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16th May 2024 4:32am
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Re: Re. secret lives of stars
18th May 2024 4:29am
Yeah, easier said than done, too.... but I figure it's like anything else if you don't use it you'll lose it...
Good luck in your recharge, my friend
keep me posted!
🌹
💙
Good luck in your recharge, my friend
keep me posted!
🌹
💙
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 00:01am
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16th May 2024 4:32am
You're lovely.... it's good to be seen, dear lady.
Hope you've been hanging in there. I've kept reading along and you continue to leave me breathless. Thank you.
🌹💙
x
Hope you've been hanging in there. I've kept reading along and you continue to leave me breathless. Thank you.
🌹💙
x
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16th May 2024 4:40am
Re. secret lives of stars
It is so good to see you back Blueboo🤗
♥️♥️♥️♥️
🌹 🌹 🌹
This piece Inspires me and as always you never disappoint with your ink ✍️
( Jackie does happy dance 🎼 )
Loves you Sis
Jackie xoxoxox
♥️♥️♥️♥️
🌹 🌹 🌹
This piece Inspires me and as always you never disappoint with your ink ✍️
( Jackie does happy dance 🎼 )
Loves you Sis
Jackie xoxoxox
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16th May 2024 4:42am
JACKIE! My sister in poetic arms!!! Thanks for that lovely and uplifting return. I'm so happy to see you here and I earnestly hope you've been writing a little ink here on DUP and having some happy days, personally as well ...
You're deserving dear one... 💯
Btw, YOU inspire as well, huge thanks for that! 👍🏻
Much love and here's to many more happy days ahead 🥂
🌹💙 - S
You're deserving dear one... 💯
Btw, YOU inspire as well, huge thanks for that! 👍🏻
Much love and here's to many more happy days ahead 🥂
🌹💙 - S
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 00:39am
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16th May 2024 4:34am
Ohhh, MS.
It's wonderfully good to put something out there to be read thanks for being here and for taking the time.
🌹-💙
It's wonderfully good to put something out there to be read thanks for being here and for taking the time.
🌹-💙
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 00:44am
Sweet sentiments to return with, S. I'm glad you got your mojo back. 🌼
My juju pretty much turned to doo doo.
I live to struggle. 🙄
My juju pretty much turned to doo doo.
I live to struggle. 🙄
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16th May 2024 4:37am
Not quite sure what all is back, yet... but I stir and that's certainly progress.
Trust me, I absolutely get it.... 'struggling' is my middle name.... Love having your eyes on me... Awww shucks.. 😉
Can't wait to read your working that I missed, (I read little, when time allowed) ... I look forward to it greatly.
🌹💙
Trust me, I absolutely get it.... 'struggling' is my middle name.... Love having your eyes on me... Awww shucks.. 😉
Can't wait to read your working that I missed, (I read little, when time allowed) ... I look forward to it greatly.
🌹💙
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 1:16am
Welcome back, B.
Your words are laced with beauty and hope.
These pages need you.
Your words are laced with beauty and hope.
These pages need you.
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Re: Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 4:44am
Your thoughtfulness via comments are like a much need balm for my soul, dear, M.
Love love love having you here... it always makes me smile.
🌹💙
xo
Love love love having you here... it always makes me smile.
🌹💙
xo
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 1:49am
The stars have brought you and me together. Keep on writing you strong beautiful smart sexy woman.
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16th May 2024 4:45am
There goes that charm.... off the chain, Francisco!!
You never disappoint, thanks for that... it's comforting!
🌹💙 - B
You never disappoint, thanks for that... it's comforting!
🌹💙 - B
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 3:10am
EEP! Hey gorgeous! Having poetry limp clit suuucckks, and not in the good way.
I love the optimism in this, you build upon such positive moments, and have grand hope and love within the piece.
It's good to see you.
I hope all is well in your universe!
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16th May 2024 5:05am
"... and I love you most of all scarecrow"
Just my attempt at nerdy humor 👆🏻
You already know just how hard I fan-girl crush/gush on you ... and how far I (cannot help but) go with my verbal/written diarrhea, when it comes to my adoration and how deep that feeling goes for me.. It's your incredible ink that bullseye connects with something inside myself, leaving a mark and impacting me like none before or since. Books need to be filled with your words , spoken word, recored of it and I shall be a proud and slightly scary (in a good way)super fan, collecting them all. Anyway, that's the level of, the rush of excitement and pride I take in reading and immersing myself in your poems.
I consider myself beyond lucky, to catch your eye for your kind feedback. It means more to me than you know, that you take time; I am beyond appreciative you have.
Btw, I connect with each and every piece you write, but don't comment on everything because if I did those comments would all be this long, this intricate or worse and I would 100% completely embarrass myself... hahaha...
Just know, I've read them and probably conjure comment in my head.... Silly Blue!
I will definitely finish playing catch up with what I missed of your ink recently.... seriously can't wait.
Big hugs, dearest one.
Please stay around DU for a spell, if possible ... You're such a fucking kick ass force, man I love feeling it.
🌹-💋
-x
Just my attempt at nerdy humor 👆🏻
You already know just how hard I fan-girl crush/gush on you ... and how far I (cannot help but) go with my verbal/written diarrhea, when it comes to my adoration and how deep that feeling goes for me.. It's your incredible ink that bullseye connects with something inside myself, leaving a mark and impacting me like none before or since. Books need to be filled with your words , spoken word, recored of it and I shall be a proud and slightly scary (in a good way)super fan, collecting them all. Anyway, that's the level of, the rush of excitement and pride I take in reading and immersing myself in your poems.
I consider myself beyond lucky, to catch your eye for your kind feedback. It means more to me than you know, that you take time; I am beyond appreciative you have.
Btw, I connect with each and every piece you write, but don't comment on everything because if I did those comments would all be this long, this intricate or worse and I would 100% completely embarrass myself... hahaha...
Just know, I've read them and probably conjure comment in my head.... Silly Blue!
I will definitely finish playing catch up with what I missed of your ink recently.... seriously can't wait.
Big hugs, dearest one.
Please stay around DU for a spell, if possible ... You're such a fucking kick ass force, man I love feeling it.
🌹-💋
-x
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16th May 2024 12:28pm
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 6:10am
Hi beautiful
It's wonderful to have you back. Sending hugs and stuff across the pond
Love and light
Ron
FOREVER TEAM BLUE X
It's wonderful to have you back. Sending hugs and stuff across the pond
Love and light
Ron
FOREVER TEAM BLUE X
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18th May 2024 4:16am
Hey there, dearest Knight!
Thanks so very much for always being here, on my side. It's heartening and absolutely cherished.
Hope you are i, thinking of you.
🌹💙 -⚔️
xoxo
Thanks so very much for always being here, on my side. It's heartening and absolutely cherished.
Hope you are i, thinking of you.
🌹💙 -⚔️
xoxo
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 11:01am
when time
shows hands
in nonlinear reflections
Hands on a clock....
Nonlinear.......not reciprocated
There's something here under a mountain of debris....a disguise.
shows hands
in nonlinear reflections
Hands on a clock....
Nonlinear.......not reciprocated
There's something here under a mountain of debris....a disguise.
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Re: Re. secret lives of stars
18th May 2024 4:19am
That mountain is epic, indeed....and yeah, buried deep, is where I can't help but store it .... yet you still see.... wow, astonishing, your keen eye.
Love how you understood, dear turtle.
It's a breath of fresh air 🍃
Love how you understood, dear turtle.
It's a breath of fresh air 🍃
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18th May 2024 5:15pm
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18th May 2024 5:15pm
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 4:09pm
You are a talented writer dear Blue, and always will be even though you may take a sabbatical once in a while. When your Muse comes in, you rock! Stay safe.
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18th May 2024 4:23am
GRACE! What a treat, seeing you here!
Thank you so much for finding a moment you leave such lovely comments, which truly made my night.
Sending warm tidings your way, dear lady ✨
🌹B
Thank you so much for finding a moment you leave such lovely comments, which truly made my night.
Sending warm tidings your way, dear lady ✨
🌹B
Re. secret lives of stars
16th May 2024 5:08pm
I really enjoy this piece, Lady Blue💕 It's like a much needed hug. These stanzas warmed my heart especially,
"wrap ourselves
sealed in perfect
warmth
safe, together
take harbor
there"
What could be better, more romantic, more intimate?
Bravissima❤️
"wrap ourselves
sealed in perfect
warmth
safe, together
take harbor
there"
What could be better, more romantic, more intimate?
Bravissima❤️
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Re: Re. secret lives of stars
18th May 2024 4:27am
You're a cornucopia of loveliness and a sight for these sore eyes!!
I feel your big 'ol bear hug all the way from here and bask in it's genuine warmth, my majestic one... thank you for finding something of worth that also warmed you as well.... Yes, my romantic side was definitely peeking...
Glad you got a looksee!.
Talk soon, - 💙
🐻💞🐰
I feel your big 'ol bear hug all the way from here and bask in it's genuine warmth, my majestic one... thank you for finding something of worth that also warmed you as well.... Yes, my romantic side was definitely peeking...
Glad you got a looksee!.
Talk soon, - 💙
🐻💞🐰
Re. secret lives of stars
18th May 2024 4:03am
Definitely nothing wrong with your JUJU
All still intact and working like the magic you always show.
Richard
All still intact and working like the magic you always show.
Richard
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18th May 2024 4:20am
Hey there, Richard.
You made me smile, with this little visit.... a warm thanks for those kind words.
Glad you found something here.
🌹B
You made me smile, with this little visit.... a warm thanks for those kind words.
Glad you found something here.
🌹B
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19th May 2024 8:36pm
You're extremely kind... thank you for that lovely comment... really.
It's greatly felt.
🌹💙 - B
It's greatly felt.
🌹💙 - B
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Anonymous
18th May 2024 4:35am
Feels like all day foreplay within the folds of nature.
Welcome back Blue...
Welcome back Blue...
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Re: Re. secret lives of stars
19th May 2024 8:39pm
There's always an underlying sense of need drawing from my wellspring, almost always... lol. Thanks for feeling it like you have... You're not far off... very astute indeed, my lovely friend.
Missed you and your thoughtful comments. Looking forward to reading you.... Been far too long.
Much love and warmest appreciation,
🌹💙
Missed you and your thoughtful comments. Looking forward to reading you.... Been far too long.
Much love and warmest appreciation,
🌹💙
Re. secret lives of stars
18th May 2024 6:26am
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19th May 2024 8:42pm
Awww...thanks for feeling the vibe, CF.
You're a sight for sore eyes, my friend.
Thank you thank you.
Hope you are doing well!... Here's to reading/seeing/more of your ink and your presence, too.
🌹💙 - B
You're a sight for sore eyes, my friend.
Thank you thank you.
Hope you are doing well!... Here's to reading/seeing/more of your ink and your presence, too.
🌹💙 - B
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18th May 2024 2:07pm
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19th May 2024 8:43pm
You're the best, LilD.
I'm stoked to get to play reading catch up with your ink and see where you're heading next....
Thanks, dear lady... missed you, you.
🌹💙
I'm stoked to get to play reading catch up with your ink and see where you're heading next....
Thanks, dear lady... missed you, you.
🌹💙
Re. secret lives of stars
19th May 2024 1:49am
Dear BV,
Hallelujah! A triumphant return. Awesome to see you back!! Now to the poem. Lovely. Simply lovely. It felt like being enveloped by a sunny blanket. As though there were no insecurities left to obsess about and only support and elevation of spirits were the only things to bring joy. Truly felt a calm fall over my agitated nerves. Beautiful piece. H🌷
Hallelujah! A triumphant return. Awesome to see you back!! Now to the poem. Lovely. Simply lovely. It felt like being enveloped by a sunny blanket. As though there were no insecurities left to obsess about and only support and elevation of spirits were the only things to bring joy. Truly felt a calm fall over my agitated nerves. Beautiful piece. H🌷
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19th May 2024 8:48pm
Ohhh Honoria! It's a return, anyway... hahaha... I absolutely thank you for that kind comment.... truly.
That feeling of warmth you describe really made me feel honored and special. Knowing that I could elicit that type of amazing response leaves me motivated and totally reinvigorated. I hope my time here is something that I can potentially maintain, as I missed you all (especially you!) so.
Thank you, my dear.... thank you.
I'm humbled you found beauty here.
🌹💙
That feeling of warmth you describe really made me feel honored and special. Knowing that I could elicit that type of amazing response leaves me motivated and totally reinvigorated. I hope my time here is something that I can potentially maintain, as I missed you all (especially you!) so.
Thank you, my dear.... thank you.
I'm humbled you found beauty here.
🌹💙
Re. secret lives of stars
25th May 2024 4:28pm
Very nice...
"... take harbor ... there ... " - This sounds so pefectly atmospheric, perfectly peacefil.
Congrats, Bluevelvete.
"... take harbor ... there ... " - This sounds so pefectly atmospheric, perfectly peacefil.
Congrats, Bluevelvete.
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Honey, you clearly got that poetic juju rolling again. This is so beautifully passionate and like a soul compass pointed to love. There is magic here that speaks to the source of being and took me on a voyage into the heart of what it means to be human whose purpose is to love and make the most of life here on this planet because it is short and oh so fleeting. The sunshine here just penetrates me as I read and I am in love with what you created. Your com back here is radiant yet soft and filled with warmth. Love this, my darling one.
Much love,
John
Much love,
John
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Re. secret lives of stars
30th May 2024 5:31pm
Exuberant to see you've returned!
I love the line:
sealed in perfect warmth safe, together
-conjured an image of sunlight through sheer curtains and snuggling under a soft down comforter
-KP
I love the line:
sealed in perfect warmth safe, together
-conjured an image of sunlight through sheer curtains and snuggling under a soft down comforter
-KP
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Re. secret lives of stars
3rd Jun 2024 6:29am
That's brilliantly written. Goosebumps.. I'd like to see that sky. This belongs in the list. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
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Hoi hoi
In a wild life area, where there is little or no internet, it’s easy to blame the technical circumstances. Now I see the real reason and how you are fighting your way back.
Very brave and graciously. Also as a sure sign of craftswomanship.
Everyone picks his/her own favourite line.
Mine is:
[how beautifully neverending!]
This poem reads like a dream, like a prayer. Unmistakable marked with your thumb print.
You’re no here to entertain me, but while you’re at it you do a very fine job!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
In a wild life area, where there is little or no internet, it’s easy to blame the technical circumstances. Now I see the real reason and how you are fighting your way back.
Very brave and graciously. Also as a sure sign of craftswomanship.
Everyone picks his/her own favourite line.
Mine is:
[how beautifully neverending!]
This poem reads like a dream, like a prayer. Unmistakable marked with your thumb print.
You’re no here to entertain me, but while you’re at it you do a very fine job!
Thank you!
Kind regards, Gus
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Re. secret lives of stars
18th Jul 2024 7:43am
So happy to have stumbled upon your page on this sunny morning :-)
Love this piece, the wording is simply amazing.
to gloriously merge
as colliding stars > to me there's few things more beautiful than colliding stars 💕
Love this piece, the wording is simply amazing.
to gloriously merge
as colliding stars > to me there's few things more beautiful than colliding stars 💕
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Re. secret lives of stars
19th Jul 2024 8:18pm
Blue, we've missed you, and I know "we" can be verified by the number of comments and RLs here, especially with this piece.
Truly a palpable and touching write.
Truly a palpable and touching write.
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