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This man, ? No, Man

   
   
The road to humanity is strewn with thorns, spikes, with shards of bloody resistance,on  
our chest we must creep to get to its heart, to which the roads are even paved with stark rejection,    
merciless actions, irresponsible objections, and denial of the clear facts,,mindset fallacy and foremost false pretense..  
   
And to the soul, the road is much more hard to follow, it passes over mountains  
of patience, and across oceans of spontaneity, sail counter the flow of the actual  
current,.......turn the hours back to original initiation..the soul is the abstract  
core that is frail, malleable, vulnerable, it may break easily as we try to handle    
its feelings, it may slide freely between our fingers, as we try to gather its liquid consistency.  
   
The human is very high, very hard to reach, very difficult to convince, the human is  
a perpetual quest, an never ending conquest..........if you reach that summit and*  
stand on top, then you need not to wage colossal sums on deep space, on James Webb  
on oceans' abyssal depths.....on even medical and physical and scientific creation........  
   
Travel into the black hole of the human mind, you risk to get  sucked in, swallowed  
into its empty vortex.......you risk to be prey to his own snare, if you do not  
arm yourself with solid knowledge, original faith, thoughtful intelligence.and guiding human light  
   
I have seen the mountain with its rigid feel, and the forest with its airy depth.....  
but never failed to feel closer and closer to their kernel, to their spirit, unlike the  
most closer being to me, my look-alike creature, the most human of all humans on earth, man is still a stranger entity, deeper than a forest, unshakable in position, like a mountain, even much more, while the mountains, actually, they move while we don't feel them..........change their positions in space, breathe and record our vibrations as we pass...  
......  
Man needs a genuine brainstorming, with in-depth knowledge and a detailed study; meticulous*  
and thorough to just detect where and when this creature is going to respond to our actions.
Written by poeticdelight (Hamid)
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