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Curiosity
What happens when curiosity gets a hold of me?
Thoughts churn and swell in a deep well connected to the sea.
Can the rhythm of a song take me somewhere I don’t know?
Can a touch illicit emotion deep below?
If I close my eyes, where will I be?
It’s a dark tumble into my own insanity.
Would I follow the silly rabbit with a bow?
Or would the hatter keep me down below?
A picnic table set for three.
I’ll move on, not for me.
A road of gold should I follow?
A land beyond not a hollow.
Little wisps of fire and flame,
Calls to me, by my name.
I Open my eyes, and I return.
To a land of forget-me-nots,
And a castle that burns.
Curiosity is like a Cheshire's cat.
Curiosity wears a wizard's hat.
Curiosity led me to write this poem.
It’s a fickle thing and needs to stay home.
Thoughts churn and swell in a deep well connected to the sea.
Can the rhythm of a song take me somewhere I don’t know?
Can a touch illicit emotion deep below?
If I close my eyes, where will I be?
It’s a dark tumble into my own insanity.
Would I follow the silly rabbit with a bow?
Or would the hatter keep me down below?
A picnic table set for three.
I’ll move on, not for me.
A road of gold should I follow?
A land beyond not a hollow.
Little wisps of fire and flame,
Calls to me, by my name.
I Open my eyes, and I return.
To a land of forget-me-nots,
And a castle that burns.
Curiosity is like a Cheshire's cat.
Curiosity wears a wizard's hat.
Curiosity led me to write this poem.
It’s a fickle thing and needs to stay home.
Author's Note
Can you pick out all the fairy tales in this one? I am telling you my "prompt" was curiosity and it led me to this?
I will post all the fairy tales tomorrow. Its just a playful thought and Curiosity reminded me of children.
I will post all the fairy tales tomorrow. Its just a playful thought and Curiosity reminded me of children.
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Re. Curiosity
Anonymous
7th May 2024 2:23am
I got Alice in Wonderland out of it. Not sure of others. :)
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7th May 2024 2:25am
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7th May 2024 12:08pm
Thank you for playing with me. the last one was
Sleeping Beauty
Castle was not on fire but the thorns were. I twisted it. lol
Sleeping Beauty
Castle was not on fire but the thorns were. I twisted it. lol
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Anonymous
7th May 2024 12:17pm
Ahhhhh, you're welcome. And I enjoyed playing with you.
That sounds a little dirty doesn't it. lol
That sounds a little dirty doesn't it. lol
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7th May 2024 12:26pm
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Anonymous
7th May 2024 3:06am
I thought about that, but considered it a yellow brick road. :)
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7th May 2024 3:07am
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7th May 2024 3:07am
I wanna say Fantasia. I feel like theres some hints to that effect. The wizards hat and the wisps?
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7th May 2024 3:12am
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7th May 2024 3:18am
Is the sea and the rhythm of a song alluding to The Little Mermaid?
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7th May 2024 3:19am
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7th May 2024 12:09pm
Appreciate you playing with me, the last one was
Sleeping Beauty
The castle was not on fire, but the thorns were. I twisted it. (Wink)
Sleeping Beauty
The castle was not on fire, but the thorns were. I twisted it. (Wink)
Re: Re. Curiosity
7th May 2024 12:21pm
Damn it! That was the one I was stuck on. The burning castle. I was racking my brain on that one. Well played Fia. That was actually a fun little write and super cool on the reader interactivity. I enjoyed this.
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7th May 2024 12:25pm
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7th May 2024 4:14am
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7th May 2024 4:26am
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7th May 2024 4:41am
The rabbit in Alice in Wonderland. Three places at the table but not for me. lol
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7th May 2024 4:51am
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7th May 2024 5:20am
Loved it
Alice, wizard of oz, willow of whisp
Great read
Love and light
Ron xx
Alice, wizard of oz, willow of whisp
Great read
Love and light
Ron xx
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7th May 2024 11:57am
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7th May 2024 11:58am
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7th May 2024 12:00pm
LOL, No. I was in so much pain from a toothache. I closed my eyes and went with the word curiosity.
Was going to go dark but ended up on the Disney channel. (Aaaaaa)
Was going to go dark but ended up on the Disney channel. (Aaaaaa)
Re. Curiosity
7th May 2024 12:04pm
Oh I love this write, so very clever. The image drew me in instantly.
Fairytales rock! Everything fairytale that came up while reading is already mentioned :-)
Fairytales rock! Everything fairytale that came up while reading is already mentioned :-)
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7th May 2024 12:07pm
All but one. The answer is Sleeping Beauty.
I twisted the castle on fire when it was the thorns on fire, and he fought the dragon.
I twisted the castle on fire when it was the thorns on fire, and he fought the dragon.
Re. Curiosity
7th May 2024 2:48pm
👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 absolutely amazing 👏 and very adventurous nicely done with curiosity being the main topic for of the curious one's out there!!
Also the road of gold wizard of oz! And the picnic at the table Alice in wonder land, the the little mermaid 🧜♀️ deep as the sea, then the cat 🐈 in the hat would probably be the places you'll go i guess and mini and mickey! Would be my last guess from Walt Disney!!
Nice game 🎮 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
Also the road of gold wizard of oz! And the picnic at the table Alice in wonder land, the the little mermaid 🧜♀️ deep as the sea, then the cat 🐈 in the hat would probably be the places you'll go i guess and mini and mickey! Would be my last guess from Walt Disney!!
Nice game 🎮 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok queen 👸 peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always 💖
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7th May 2024 2:51pm
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7th May 2024 6:05pm
I did say wizard of oz fia? Sleeping 😴 beauty ooh snap well at least I was closest with most of them all??? Fia:))))
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