Death Makes A Housecall

Wonderful poems together
Richard

Thank you.

Fantastic! Nice & dark. Perfect!

Gotta stay true to myself. Thanks Keith.

I think they should add another button (other than like) to this ... maybe (I'm scared shitless button).. this is fucking dark stuff

That's a really good idea. I like the way you think Sam. Appreciate the read.

I like the sound of a scared shitless button
R

I like the darkness in this. We're listening to the thoughts of a killer who has a job to do and is not backing out. It does beg the question - what did the guy do?

I've heard of people getting someone to kill their spouse, so perhaps it's his way of saying you fucked up pal. You get what you deserve.

Thanks for commenting. Its always cool to see how different people interpret your writes.  

When I created this one, the thought was to speak from the point of view of the incarnation of Death. He has come to collect from someone who had wished for death and in the final moment, the reality sets in for the intended target. But its too late. Death must make his claim.

WOW! That's a great interpretation I never would have thought of. Great!

👏 👏 👏!! Nice 👌 work this reminds me of a poem I wrote called A.O.D'S angels of death!!

Great 👍 work again 👏 my friend 👏 please 🙏 keep on writing ✍ ok peace ✌ and blessings 🙏 always

Thanks brother. Appreciate you. Did you post A.O.D. here? If so, I'll take a look

Yes 👍 I did post it up here my friend check it out when you get a chance ok 👌 please let me know 🙏 what you think 🤔

I def will. Im gonna dive into your catalog as soon as i get free

Ok 👌 copy my friend please do!!