Family Drama

Again, the non- chalance in the words and delivery work
You have a way of making the horrific, just another day, lol.
Which it kinda is.

That's my strong love for satire. There's lots of black humor in my writing. Just have to know me and how I present it. Thanks for the comments.

No woman, ever! Intriguing poem. I like black humor, too!
Good work, Keith!

Thank you my friend

It's my pleasure, Keith.

Poetic cringe... nicely done...

Thanks LDF. I appreciate you.

First..yes, its unfortunate that this a reality for som, sadly. Just wanted you know (which pardon if you do, and you choose the wrong word intentionally) its HUNG not HANGED. 🥰❤️💯🫂

Thanks Phillis. Pictures are hung people are hanged.

"Here is an excellent way to remember this. The person who oversees a hanging execution is called a hangman, not a hungman."


https://www.businesswritingblog.com/business_writing/2021/11/hanged-vs-hung.html

Thanks for the feedback!

Ahh..thanks for the lesson..my bad 🥰❤️💯🫂

All good

You always seem to have a POW at the end of some of your poems. There's a horrible truth in this in that I'm sure in some districts it's happening now, minus the death. That might come later.

That's usually what I go for. A large POW or BANG or TWIST. Appreciate the kind words!