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Winter (Acrostic)
When my heart
in all its reverent and
nefarious offerings,
tossed a coin to the boatman,
eternity so began its
rapture upon my mind.
Published 26th Apr 2024
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26th Apr 2024 3:09pm
Dear IP,
I liked the stark relatability of this poem. Realizing bits and pieces of the self can be sobering for me at times. Great write. H🌷
I liked the stark relatability of this poem. Realizing bits and pieces of the self can be sobering for me at times. Great write. H🌷
26th Apr 2024 4:31pm
Hi Honoria, again thankyou for reading me I genuinly appreciate your comments, it can be very sobering.
7th Oct 2024 12:04pm
Acrostics are a soft spot of mine, though I rarely write one.
...This is beautiful, captures the darkness of winter...
Also: good to see you back online, you've been missed 🙏🏻
...This is beautiful, captures the darkness of winter...
Also: good to see you back online, you've been missed 🙏🏻
