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I'm Not Crazy
There's so much turmoil
In my wrecked head
Some days it doesn't pay
To even get out of bed
I'm always taken so off guard
When I do get up
By those who just don't matter
With their social fantastical chatter
If you tell them to get a life
your words you'll see them splattered
Like the letters in a game of Scrabble
In senseless banter and pointless warble
Maybe, I'm not crazy after all
As I watch them falter and eventually fall
In my wrecked head
Some days it doesn't pay
To even get out of bed
I'm always taken so off guard
When I do get up
By those who just don't matter
With their social fantastical chatter
If you tell them to get a life
your words you'll see them splattered
Like the letters in a game of Scrabble
In senseless banter and pointless warble
Maybe, I'm not crazy after all
As I watch them falter and eventually fall
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Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 11:23am
Hello,
This is great. Great flow and the rhymes are tight. Nicely done!
This is great. Great flow and the rhymes are tight. Nicely done!
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Re: Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 11:25am
Thank you so much for reading and responding to my poem! I just posted it!
Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 11:28am
Dear F,
I could relate to all the inside head chatter from outside voices. What chaos until I decide to tune it out. Wonderful write with great meter and clever format. H🌷
I could relate to all the inside head chatter from outside voices. What chaos until I decide to tune it out. Wonderful write with great meter and clever format. H🌷
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25th Apr 2024 11:43am
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25th Apr 2024 11:31am
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25th Apr 2024 11:45am
Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 11:42am
So hard to find depth amongst the meaningless chatter. You are def not the crazy one.
I cherish silence, lol
I think your write rings true for many of us.
I cherish silence, lol
I think your write rings true for many of us.
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Re: Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 6:47pm
Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 11:58am
Hi I really liked this write, it's penned very well and it's contents are very relatable:)
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Re: Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 6:48pm
Re. I'm Not Crazy
25th Apr 2024 3:28pm
Girl, you ain’t crazy.
What’s crazy is people who don’t know themselves, who need to be validated by what’s virtual, most of all, virtual controversy, drama, games…anything toxic.
What’s crazy is people who don’t know themselves, who need to be validated by what’s virtual, most of all, virtual controversy, drama, games…anything toxic.
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25th Apr 2024 6:49pm
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