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Daffodils
we could count
daisies, daffodils
and dandelions
You and me
track the flight
of the ladybugs
bumble bees
& butterflies
dance in the
dunes in june
lie on the grass
and talk for hours
& as we go to sleep
we can count the stars
daisies, daffodils
and dandelions
You and me
track the flight
of the ladybugs
bumble bees
& butterflies
dance in the
dunes in june
lie on the grass
and talk for hours
& as we go to sleep
we can count the stars
Author's Note
The beauty of Mother nature.
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Re. Daffodils
23rd Apr 2024 3:21pm
Having just returned from a lovely weekend surrounded by nature...this one feeds my soul! The little bumble bee butt is giving me huge smiles, sis 💖
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23rd Apr 2024 3:32pm
Ah, I was hoping this little poem and photo would give you smiles, ain't that the most cutest bumble bee? Thanks heaps for your comment and for taking her home with you, sis 💖
Re. Daffodils
23rd Apr 2024 4:01pm
This poem is so elegant and flowing. Nature is such a blessing to behold.
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Re: Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 7:33am
That's such an amazing thing to say, Thor.
Thanks heaps for the comment and reading list :-)
Thanks heaps for the comment and reading list :-)
Re. Daffodils
23rd Apr 2024 6:16pm
Romance and nature all rolled up in a perfect bow! I adore this write so much :))
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24th Apr 2024 7:33am
Re. Daffodils
23rd Apr 2024 7:33pm
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24th Apr 2024 7:33am
This was a bit of a different style for me
Grateful you think it's lovely, thanks heaps Naajir.
Grateful you think it's lovely, thanks heaps Naajir.
Re. Daffodils
23rd Apr 2024 8:13pm
you've captured the essence of nature’s beauty through a serene and vivid depiction.
a gentle reminder of how beautiful nature is.
great ink
a gentle reminder of how beautiful nature is.
great ink
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Re: Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 7:36am
That's such an amazing to say, I do think it's important to remind ourselves how beautiful nature is. Thanks heaps for dropping by and leaving some love on this one.
Re. Daffodils
23rd Apr 2024 8:37pm
just count the stars???? seriously!?!? and I though..... okay... never mind.... lets just count the stars... I like counting stars...
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Re: Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 7:38am
Why not? Counting stars is amazing, glad you agree.
And thanks heaps or the visit and comment :-)
And thanks heaps or the visit and comment :-)
Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 4:00am
I found tranquility in this ink D!
Beautiful the subject, the delivery.
Thank you for this.
Beautiful the subject, the delivery.
Thank you for this.
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Re: Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 7:40am
You're so very welcome, my friend. I'm happy you found tranquility in this piece.
Thanks heaps for your comment and for taking her home with you :-)
Thanks heaps for your comment and for taking her home with you :-)
Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 10:24am
Dear D,
I enjoyed the playfulness in this piece. I read it two ways. Between two friends and the innocence of enjoying the beauty of nature and friendship and then between two lovers. In either case it’s filled with fun and beauty. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed the playfulness in this piece. I read it two ways. Between two friends and the innocence of enjoying the beauty of nature and friendship and then between two lovers. In either case it’s filled with fun and beauty. Lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 11:58am
Dear H,
So happy you enjoyed this little write of mine. It can indeed be read both ways, I decided to leave that up to the reader. Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts! D 💕
So happy you enjoyed this little write of mine. It can indeed be read both ways, I decided to leave that up to the reader. Thanks for dropping by and leaving your thoughts! D 💕
Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 11:49am
Lovely tribute to spring... I see daffodils in my morning walks with my pup...
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Re: Re. Daffodils
24th Apr 2024 12:00pm
There's daffodils here too, gotta love daffodils :-)
Thanks heaps for reading me & leaving a comment.
Thanks heaps for reading me & leaving a comment.
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24th Apr 2024 2:01pm
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24th Apr 2024 2:03pm
Re. Daffodils
25th May 2024 2:01pm
I love the simple poetry like me, that chants Nature's beauty in the most simple dictionary, like for everybody to see and enjoy.
Nice wording and fine thoughts,Happiness to your soul.
Nice wording and fine thoughts,Happiness to your soul.
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25th May 2024 2:03pm