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Broken Girl
at first it looks like
i'm a confident and
independent lady
while deep inside
there is this lonely
little girl who has
never felt loved
at times all that
she wants is for
someone to take
her hand, guide
her and lead her
through the battle
fields called life
show her the way
protect her tell her
she'll be okay, that
she's safe, that she
is and will always be
perfect exactly as she is
i'm a confident and
independent lady
while deep inside
there is this lonely
little girl who has
never felt loved
at times all that
she wants is for
someone to take
her hand, guide
her and lead her
through the battle
fields called life
show her the way
protect her tell her
she'll be okay, that
she's safe, that she
is and will always be
perfect exactly as she is
Published 18th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by a quote: beneath every strong, independent woman lies a broken little girl who had to learn how to get back up and to never depend on anyone - Anonymous
Your hand in mine: https://youtu.be/zzgqeiaNDiU
Your hand in mine: https://youtu.be/zzgqeiaNDiU
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18th Apr 2024 4:55pm
I can so relate!
I do EMDR, and I’ve spent time in session traveling back to little Audrey and holding her hand while reliving traumatic memories. It’s been so healing! I have to say it’s also been a very powerful feeling to BE the one returning to little me, I don’t need anyone else but myself to lift me up now!
I do EMDR, and I’ve spent time in session traveling back to little Audrey and holding her hand while reliving traumatic memories. It’s been so healing! I have to say it’s also been a very powerful feeling to BE the one returning to little me, I don’t need anyone else but myself to lift me up now!
18th Apr 2024 5:13pm
Thanks for sharing such a personal story. I firmly believe healing can begin when we embrace that little girl, nurture her, cradle her and give her the love that was lacking. Happy to hear EMDR is of great help. Thanks for your comment and thoughts, lady, I appreciate you 💕
18th Apr 2024 5:27pm
you are perfect exactly as you are... is this okay??.. oh and the poem as well of course
19th Apr 2024 9:02am
18th Apr 2024 5:40pm
I love how honest and simplistic this is, it really does evoke so much emotion from the reader who can just absorb how earnestthese lines are. I totally adore it :)
19th Apr 2024 9:02am
That's such an amazing thing to say, that it evokes so much emotion.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, Inkplay.
Thanks heaps for your visit and comment, Inkplay.
19th Apr 2024 4:11am
I'd give you multiple hugs and extras to store somewhere when only a hug will do..
BIG HUG
💌
BIG HUG
💌
19th Apr 2024 9:03am
Thanks heaps for your comment, PoetSpeak, I appreciate you :-)
Going to wrap myself in those hugs from yours for a bit.
Going to wrap myself in those hugs from yours for a bit.
19th Apr 2024 12:45pm
My supply of hugs generates more on a daily basis. Let me know if you run low, I will expedite a delivery....
19th Apr 2024 2:58pm
