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Hereditary
I'm destined to fail
Both parents unsuccessful
Can I make a change?
Both parents unsuccessful
Can I make a change?
Published 16th Apr 2024
| Edited 17th Apr 2024
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17th Apr 2024 00:27am
Nice capturing of being at the cross-roads, mid-life crisis, or even just simply part of being an adult in one of the various stages and transitions. You capture all of that in this haiku. Good job!
17th Apr 2024 00:29am
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