Safety Bubble

That was beautiful Faith… you know Im still in the other room .. haven’t walked away yet

How lovely! :)

Strength and vulnerability in the same poem!

Thank you!

I feel this beautiful Faith if there is still love you can reunite 💕

Thank you so much for your lovely comments.

Economic effective and true. My favorite kind of poem. Thank you for sharing

Thank you for reading my poem and for your wonderful response to it!

This is so beautifully vulnerable Faith :)

Thank you for your wonderful response to my poem! I really appreciate it!

You captured perfectly, we all yearn for a safe place to nurse our broken heart.
Very eloquent words.

Debbie, thank you. You just made my heart smile!

I see this poem evokes a poignant sense of emotional vulnerability and introspection. The imagery of being within a "safe bubble" suggests a retreat into oneself for protection, perhaps as a response to the pain of heartbreak. The act of nursing a wounded heart implies a process of healing and self-care, tenderly attending to the emotional wounds inflicted by the departure of a loved one. The final line, "After you walked away from me," encapsulates the sense of loss and abandonment, highlighting the enduring impact of separation. Overall, it's a deeply evocative portrayal of heartache and the journey towards healing and self-discovery.

Thank you for your indepth critique of my little poem. Thank you too for reading it, also.

Thank you for your kind words! I'm glad you appreciated the critique of your poem. Would you mind if we connected on Facebook or Telegram? I'd love to continue our conversation and perhaps share more of our thoughts on poetry and literature. Let me know if that sounds good to you!

I'm usually at my limit of friends ( 5,000) on Facebook and I am not on Messenger because I can't keep up with all of my chat requests. Also, the only men I talk to online are on DUP through private messaging. I'm sorry.

Can we chat via email's? plssssss