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Helpless
My brain, in the middle of the night
while I'm sleeping,
is trying to figure out,
without my knowabouts,
how to get out of my skull.
I can't get it out of my head
now that I have absolutely no way
to communicate with my brain,
to tell it to calm down.
Fascinating. The mind.
The darkness
within the darkness.
The murmed brain that expels the thought.
while I'm sleeping,
is trying to figure out,
without my knowabouts,
how to get out of my skull.
I can't get it out of my head
now that I have absolutely no way
to communicate with my brain,
to tell it to calm down.
Fascinating. The mind.
The darkness
within the darkness.
The murmed brain that expels the thought.
Published 6th Apr 2024
Author's Note
Trying to realize where I come from. I stay amused with myself.
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6th Apr 2024 7:56am
This is a write that seems to open up like one of those mathmathical forms that you can fold out. Like trying to solve a rubriks cube. Thanks for the nudges, much appreciated!
6th Apr 2024 9:59am
Dear P,
Stanza two felt like you succinctly described a typical day in my world 😊
I appreciated the subject of this piece because the mind is a terrible thing to waste but there’s so much of it I don’t understand in its workings I can’t help but think it’s wasting away on its own if it isn’t going to explain itself to me 🤷🏻♀️
Truly appreciated and enjoyed this write. H🌷
Stanza two felt like you succinctly described a typical day in my world 😊
I appreciated the subject of this piece because the mind is a terrible thing to waste but there’s so much of it I don’t understand in its workings I can’t help but think it’s wasting away on its own if it isn’t going to explain itself to me 🤷🏻♀️
Truly appreciated and enjoyed this write. H🌷
