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soft touch
in
the same
skillful way satin
serenades smooth silky skin . .
the soft touch of spring
is stimulating and seducing my senses
- the scene is serene, simple and satisfying -
in
the same
sweet symbolic way,
i’m longing to
savor the soft
touch of
you
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Author's Note
- because the ache is strong -
the welcome of spring and sweet love
the welcome of spring and sweet love
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Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 5:56am
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5th Apr 2024 7:16pm
Simply longing for that soft touch. Thank you, Francisco. Your kind words are appreciated. : )
Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 6:20am
Dear BC,
Love the sensual alliteration throughout this piece. It’s rather like a soft spring breeze, a welcome caress. The formatting allows for such a smooth song-like read. Lovely write.
H🌷
Love the sensual alliteration throughout this piece. It’s rather like a soft spring breeze, a welcome caress. The formatting allows for such a smooth song-like read. Lovely write.
H🌷
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Re: Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 7:23pm
Dear Honoria, I appreciate you noticing the alliteration within. While there's a soft sensual side to this scribble, a deep longing to feel sweet love surrounds the heart even more. Spring creates a beautiful mood, indeed. So kind of you to notice the format as well.
My heart is smiling with you saying it reads like a ' smooth song. '
My best to you.
BB 🌺
My heart is smiling with you saying it reads like a ' smooth song. '
My best to you.
BB 🌺
Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 10:28am
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5th Apr 2024 7:24pm
So sweet of you to say, Debbie !
You're such a talented poetess yourself.
Happy Friday !
You're such a talented poetess yourself.
Happy Friday !
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5th Apr 2024 7:51pm
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6th Apr 2024 2:37am
Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 4:38pm
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5th Apr 2024 7:29pm
Breathtaking and exquisite !
A wonderful compliment, indeed.
I'm smiling. : )
Thank you so much !
A wonderful compliment, indeed.
I'm smiling. : )
Thank you so much !
Re: Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 7:33pm
If you can write beautiful poetry and it holds my interest, then I will praise you & give you the utmost respect. I'm not a poet that can write such beauty. Beautiful work.
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Re: Re. soft touch
6th Apr 2024 2:16am
In complete awe that you're captivated with my words of beauty.
Your respect is appreciated.
Thank you once again, for your lovely comment.
Your respect is appreciated.
Thank you once again, for your lovely comment.
Re. soft touch
5th Apr 2024 7:26pm
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Re. soft touch
6th Apr 2024 2:13am
Spring is illusive and is trying to see how much you want her. Love the words.
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Re: Re. soft touch
6th Apr 2024 2:32am
Spring creates a beautiful mood, indeed. Longing to know sweet love and its touch. Thank you for your kind words.
Re. soft touch
6th Apr 2024 4:37am
Hello charmed, how are you... since likes are kept anonymous, I wanted to let you know that I liked your write, take good care:
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Re: Re. soft touch
6th Apr 2024 6:31pm
I'm doing well, deadwolf. So kind of you to ask. I hope all is well in your world.
I appreciate you letting me know that you liked this little scribble of mine.
I'm smiling. : )
Have a wonderful day.
I appreciate you letting me know that you liked this little scribble of mine.
I'm smiling. : )
Have a wonderful day.
Re. soft touch
27th Apr 2024 11:53pm
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1st May 2024 2:24am
Thank you Faith, for your lovely comment. I appreciate you adding this to your reading list. : )
Re. soft touch
2nd Jun 2024 4:43am
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2nd Jun 2024 4:49am
Thank you, DL.
Yes, I completely agree. A soft touch can create a beautiful mood.
I appreciate you and your lovely comment.
Yes, I completely agree. A soft touch can create a beautiful mood.
I appreciate you and your lovely comment.
Re. soft touch
9th Jun 2024 1:52am
"... the scene is serene, simple and satisfying... "
So the poem is serene, simple and satisfying... Congratulations!
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And the pic you chose for your poem is romantically erotic, almost irresistable.
So the poem is serene, simple and satisfying... Congratulations!
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And the pic you chose for your poem is romantically erotic, almost irresistable.
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Re: Re. soft touch
9th Jun 2024 3:53am
And simple is satisfying, in so many ways.
So sweet of you to say the poem is serene, simple and satisfying. : )
A picture can say so much, indeed. The pose is poetic, yet playful.
Thank you, Marks.
So sweet of you to say the poem is serene, simple and satisfying. : )
A picture can say so much, indeed. The pose is poetic, yet playful.
Thank you, Marks.