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Making Love on Easter Morning
I held you close, and would not release until
you led me with velvet hands to the chamber
given by your mother where you were conceived..
The curtains of your chamber were parted
like a new bloom for my delight.
See how it glistens with the same morning dew
shared by all women of Mother Earth.
I tasted you and knew our Creator was good.
you led me with velvet hands to the chamber
given by your mother where you were conceived..
The curtains of your chamber were parted
like a new bloom for my delight.
See how it glistens with the same morning dew
shared by all women of Mother Earth.
I tasted you and knew our Creator was good.
Published 1st Apr 2024
Author's Note
My most recent lover read Song of Solomon 3 to me before we made love Easter morning. I wrote this yesterday afternoon.
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1st Apr 2024 2:13pm
How wonderfully romantic this is, my friend. It will go on my RL and in my books as my all time favorite poem of yours. Amazing work!
Faith
Faith
2nd Apr 2024 4:07am
2nd Apr 2024 11:23am
A romantic and sexy read. I would recommend couples reading the Song of Solomon to each other as a duo - see how one's partner's face reacts as you read the descriptions of them in your half of the dialogue! I could sense a reference to the Song in the first verse. Gets my RL too.
Poem captions well the picture at that point of the lovemaking act.
Poem captions well the picture at that point of the lovemaking act.
3rd Apr 2024 00:22am
