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Passion Fire
passion's fire and desire's flames
rage on in silent a force of allure
whispers of silk falling on floor
once more passion play
gentle whispers companion play
smoldering gaze in seduction
fragrance of rose attar stay
on pillows with the motions
sensual sway a symphony
hands on curves tempts
transcending time and space
two hearts and soul in harmony
muted screams towards the skies
folded in each other fly
their essence becoming one
and flutter down still entwined
rage on in silent a force of allure
whispers of silk falling on floor
once more passion play
gentle whispers companion play
smoldering gaze in seduction
fragrance of rose attar stay
on pillows with the motions
sensual sway a symphony
hands on curves tempts
transcending time and space
two hearts and soul in harmony
muted screams towards the skies
folded in each other fly
their essence becoming one
and flutter down still entwined
Written by
Grace
(IDryad)
Published 31st Mar 2024
Author's Note
Ode to a memory
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Re. Passion Fire
31st Mar 2024 12:19pm
This is so beautiful! Like I always say, "Nothing, I mean nothing, beats a great love poem." I applaud you, Grace! This is fantastic!
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Hi Faith...thank you so much for dropping by and reading. You are so kind. Thank you for the RL as well. honoured.
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31st Mar 2024 2:00pm
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31st Mar 2024 8:59pm
Nice thoughts here, memories even, boardering on the classical in its description. It almost reads like a scene from an opera, it really does! 😊
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One of those episodes that one wish would last forever...😂
thank you Billy for the compliment, you're kind. I am learning how to be subtle in erotica writes. Hope I'm improving. Thanks for the RL🙏
thank you Billy for the compliment, you're kind. I am learning how to be subtle in erotica writes. Hope I'm improving. Thanks for the RL🙏
Re. Passion Fire
31st Mar 2024 11:09pm
You captured in your wonderful poetry the essence of a passion that bonds lovers.. I like so much the visual art! A pleasure to read you!
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31st Mar 2024 11:13pm
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1st Apr 2024 5:18pm
Hi nightbirdblue, thank you so much for reading and commenting. 😊 Appreciated as always.
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