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DearSister(#2today)/ Re: SomeOne I Knew & Loved
E___ called..........
seems
they (E___/J___,~E's 'other'1/2sister~)
got in touch with L's
oncologist in Denver
whom she had appt wit several months ago.
she had a skin tumor on her scalp,
several suspicious spots on liver,
also one in her femur,
which she never told anyone about, nor
did any follow'up on,
which means this latest pancreas thing is probably cancerous.......
she's in total'blatant denial.
....she says she NEVER had cancer...
said the mastectomies of past
were a plot by R__(2nd ex-husb)
to disfigure & kill her...
& the current situation
is somehow related to
this,that,&other
such plots against her
& she's fine & not gonna
let any of these persecutions
bring her down.....
...holyshit, & g'odd bless her.......
E___ is handling it well.
...he's been dealing well
with her insanity for near 20yrs now.
......but jesus, i feel so sad for him & J___ AND R____......if it wasn't for R___'s supportiveness to E___
in the early days of her insanity,
I think E___'s life'd be a bit
different today, (& Not for the Better).
watta fckn mess.....& the eXtension
on her health insurance
(from her marriage to R___) eXpires June 15th.....
Love,
bro'dannyboo
XXXXXXXXXdkzk3may2012...all rites p'ending..
seems
they (E___/J___,~E's 'other'1/2sister~)
got in touch with L's
oncologist in Denver
whom she had appt wit several months ago.
she had a skin tumor on her scalp,
several suspicious spots on liver,
also one in her femur,
which she never told anyone about, nor
did any follow'up on,
which means this latest pancreas thing is probably cancerous.......
she's in total'blatant denial.
....she says she NEVER had cancer...
said the mastectomies of past
were a plot by R__(2nd ex-husb)
to disfigure & kill her...
& the current situation
is somehow related to
this,that,&other
such plots against her
& she's fine & not gonna
let any of these persecutions
bring her down.....
...holyshit, & g'odd bless her.......
E___ is handling it well.
...he's been dealing well
with her insanity for near 20yrs now.
......but jesus, i feel so sad for him & J___ AND R____......if it wasn't for R___'s supportiveness to E___
in the early days of her insanity,
I think E___'s life'd be a bit
different today, (& Not for the Better).
watta fckn mess.....& the eXtension
on her health insurance
(from her marriage to R___) eXpires June 15th.....
Love,
bro'dannyboo
XXXXXXXXXdkzk3may2012...all rites p'ending..
Published 3rd May 2012
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4th May 2012 2:02am
Sorry to hear man. Your style here obviously is different, obviously more personal and conversational. Are you making a deliberate change because the subject was more personal, or is it just the way this one was writ?
4th May 2012 3:18am
it's pretty much word4word the email sent to my sister after me son called & told me, but restructured to 'look like' a poom.
Art Imitates Life Imitates Art ---
tis the 2nd communique today that I transformed into High (as in lofty, ha!) Art
somedaze ye just make Life do the Work for ye, right? (Am I Right Or Am I Wrong, huh?!) oy'vey!
thank you, friend
Art Imitates Life Imitates Art ---
tis the 2nd communique today that I transformed into High (as in lofty, ha!) Art
somedaze ye just make Life do the Work for ye, right? (Am I Right Or Am I Wrong, huh?!) oy'vey!
thank you, friend
4th May 2012 3:57pm
I find these lines, tender, sad and hyper-realistic.
As tears on the paper of your poetry.
Do not stop writing what you feel.
"It can not rain forever." As the song says.
As tears on the paper of your poetry.
Do not stop writing what you feel.
"It can not rain forever." As the song says.
4th May 2012 4:34pm
