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YES, IT'S ALL THERE

LOOK!
Come closer and
take a good look.
It's waiting on YOU.
It is all there and
you can see it.
You have permission
to TOUCH it,
to EXAMINE it,
YES, to kiss it,
lick it, and yes
even SUCK it.
YES
it's my first attempt
to make lollipop suckers.
YES,
I'll try your suggestions
for making it sweeter
and better.
Written by TheOralizer
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