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No Words
There are many occurrences
that there exist no words for.
They bludgeon and defy describing.
Wandering, unexplained feelings,.
and their plaguing dealings with your thoughts.
They find crevices in my wordless voids.
Where I am still hunted and haunted
by the words unheard.
Unformed.
If there is no actual word was the feeling even born.
Things fall deeper than the final depth of the heart.
An explanation is bone barren,
than my emptiest cartilage caverns.
When a hawk circles, there exist no birds.
It's ok, if when you are raw and exposed
there exist no words.
that there exist no words for.
They bludgeon and defy describing.
Wandering, unexplained feelings,.
and their plaguing dealings with your thoughts.
They find crevices in my wordless voids.
Where I am still hunted and haunted
by the words unheard.
Unformed.
If there is no actual word was the feeling even born.
Things fall deeper than the final depth of the heart.
An explanation is bone barren,
than my emptiest cartilage caverns.
When a hawk circles, there exist no birds.
It's ok, if when you are raw and exposed
there exist no words.
Author's Note
I think every poet has been at a loss for words
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Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 1:57pm
Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 2:00pm
Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 2:33pm
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19th Mar 2024 2:54pm
Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 2:33pm
I agree. There are times where you have no words to say. Beautifully written and so well executed. The emotions just pours out of this one! Nicely done.
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Re: Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 2:55pm
Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 6:02pm
Like a void collapsing in on itself
when feelings and thoughts can't find the 'vehicle' to be
authentically articulated...
A unique struggle indeed...
when feelings and thoughts can't find the 'vehicle' to be
authentically articulated...
A unique struggle indeed...
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It was just an idea that something is so horrific or euphoric there are absolutely no words
to do it justice.
Thx for reading! I really appreciate it!
I love what you wrote in your comment, that's exactly what I was trying to convey
to do it justice.
Thx for reading! I really appreciate it!
I love what you wrote in your comment, that's exactly what I was trying to convey
Re: Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 6:37pm
'' horrific or euphoric there are absolutely no words
to do it justice. ''
that can easily be the nudge for a whole nother poem..
like...wow
to do it justice. ''
that can easily be the nudge for a whole nother poem..
like...wow
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Hmmm, yes I could def create one out of that.
My whole thing is for every agony, there is an ecstasy.
And for every ecstasy an agony will come forth
And thx for ideas 🤗
My whole thing is for every agony, there is an ecstasy.
And for every ecstasy an agony will come forth
And thx for ideas 🤗
Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 10:43pm
Re: Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 10:55pm
Hi! Thank you for stopping bye!
And for nice comments
May peace find you as well.
And for nice comments
May peace find you as well.
Re. No Words
19th Mar 2024 11:04pm
Re: Re. No Words
20th Mar 2024 2:20am
Thank you. Even though I do have real feelings I cannot put into words, I still hold out hope.
Have a good night!
Have a good night!
Re. No Words
20th Mar 2024 1:20am
I love your current avatar. Very cool!
And the accompanying pic with this write. It fits well.
Your write... Hey do like me and invent your own word to fit where needed! Sometimes it just makes sense. Spell check is merely a suggestion... Say no to AI !! Lol.
And yes, to your awesome message delivered within your write. Yet, as you've done, write through it. Even "notes" come in handy some time.
Amen to your poem. You ain't alone in this dilemma!
And the accompanying pic with this write. It fits well.
Your write... Hey do like me and invent your own word to fit where needed! Sometimes it just makes sense. Spell check is merely a suggestion... Say no to AI !! Lol.
And yes, to your awesome message delivered within your write. Yet, as you've done, write through it. Even "notes" come in handy some time.
Amen to your poem. You ain't alone in this dilemma!
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Aww. Thanks for the nice feedback.
I'm honored you liked it 😊
I know I'm writing I have no words, lol but I would never use AI.
I don't even know how, lol
I just just had some very difficult feelings this morning.
Have a peaceful night
I'm honored you liked it 😊
I know I'm writing I have no words, lol but I would never use AI.
I don't even know how, lol
I just just had some very difficult feelings this morning.
Have a peaceful night
Re. No Words
This is the feeling of a true poet. he or she don't ever write because they should, not being motivated, or stimulated by any muse. beside a good written English with fine metaphor.
Stay blessed
Stay blessed
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20th Mar 2024 1:02pm
Re. No Words
21st Mar 2024 7:00pm
This is great. Quite a challenging concept - to be able to define the undefinable. Perhaps it's a feeling, an aesthetic, an emotion, an environment, a change. That's the challenge of poetry, is putting that into words. Again, I love the concept to this. It's almost like disassociation or deep depersonalization or derealization. An alienating feeling, if one ponders upon it a lot. You can really find yourself if you can define such perplexing disposition. You did a good job exploring such a topic. It seems as though it came naturally; like you've thought of it before, heh. Solid metaphors, direction, some philosophical wonder. I like the overall sense and theme as it builds to explore the topic. You did well in organizing this. Anyway, thanks for sharing. I'll see you around!
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Re: Re. No Words
21st Mar 2024 7:20pm
Wow, thank you. Yes I may have pondered this idea before, lol.
I truly wasn't sure if I conveyed it with the right description, so I so appreciate
the feedback.
Your feedback has really helped me. 😊
I truly wasn't sure if I conveyed it with the right description, so I so appreciate
the feedback.
Your feedback has really helped me. 😊
Re. No Words
22nd Mar 2024 4:38am
I would say simply stated but it wasn't. Lovely, you crushed it girl.
Hell of a line...
"If there is no actual word was the feeling even born."
LJ
Hell of a line...
"If there is no actual word was the feeling even born."
LJ
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Re. No Words
22nd Mar 2024 8:38am
Hi! Thank you so much.
I was having some difficult feelings
and the poem took on a life of its own, lol
Thx for stopping bye
I was having some difficult feelings
and the poem took on a life of its own, lol
Thx for stopping bye
Re. No Words
30th Mar 2024 7:55pm
Hello, how are you... this was nice, I enjoyed readin this... you put the thought out into words very well... Take good care;
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Re: Re. No Words
30th Mar 2024 8:01pm
Hello, thank you so much for reading and commenting!
Have a peaceful happy night 🌙
Have a peaceful happy night 🌙