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Some days we just have to show up
We see it every day
in the vacant look
of people we love
or a strangers silent plea
Staring, just staring at mothing at all
not even seeing our dreams
as if the soul is on hold
and we're playing a role
A commitment to life
that's worn us out
and we're too tired to compete
in the rat race of existence
These are the bad days
as dishes pile up in the sink
feeling hungover getting out of bed
because we just don't care
Everything is harder
even putting on socks *why bother*
wearing pajamas half the day
and still
we're committed to life
doing it for the team
rah!, rah!, go humanity
Some days we just have to show up
in the vacant look
of people we love
or a strangers silent plea
Staring, just staring at mothing at all
not even seeing our dreams
as if the soul is on hold
and we're playing a role
A commitment to life
that's worn us out
and we're too tired to compete
in the rat race of existence
These are the bad days
as dishes pile up in the sink
feeling hungover getting out of bed
because we just don't care
Everything is harder
even putting on socks *why bother*
wearing pajamas half the day
and still
we're committed to life
doing it for the team
rah!, rah!, go humanity
Some days we just have to show up
Published 16th Mar 2024
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16th Mar 2024 7:55pm
17th Mar 2024 6:22pm
17th Mar 2024 4:14am
Dear R,
Bravo. I loved this poem for its sheer determination to get through a day. This write nails that feeling perfectly.
Well done! H🌷
Bravo. I loved this poem for its sheer determination to get through a day. This write nails that feeling perfectly.
Well done! H🌷
17th Mar 2024 6:31pm
An amazing comment, I'm really pleased you found value here and that I'm not the only one. 🙏
29th Mar 2024 12:25pm
This poem beautifully captures the raw essence of those tough days we all experience from time to time – the days where simply showing up feels like an insurmountable task. The imagery of the vacant looks and silent pleas, both from loved ones and strangers, paints a vivid picture of the universal struggle against the weight of existence.
The repetition of "Some days we just have to show up" throughout the poem reinforces the message that even when life feels overwhelming, there is value in simply persevering. The portrayal of mundane tasks becoming monumental challenges emphasizes the exhaustion that can come from the relentless pace of modern life.
Ultimately, the poem ends with a sense of resigned determination – despite the weariness and apathy, there is still a commitment to life, a recognition that even on the hardest days, we continue to push forward for the sake of ourselves and humanity as a whole. It's a poignant reminder of the resilience of the human spirit, even in the face of adversity.
The repetition of "Some days we just have to show up" throughout the poem reinforces the message that even when life feels overwhelming, there is value in simply persevering. The portrayal of mundane tasks becoming monumental challenges emphasizes the exhaustion that can come from the relentless pace of modern life.
Ultimately, the poem ends with a sense of resigned determination – despite the weariness and apathy, there is still a commitment to life, a recognition that even on the hardest days, we continue to push forward for the sake of ourselves and humanity as a whole. It's a poignant reminder of the resilience of the human spirit, even in the face of adversity.
