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Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
This poor
sweet
soul
You know, the one
I’m using to
fuck you away?
Because I can
Because it’ll hurt
Because fuck us.
(Fuck us both.)
Anyhoo.
Him.
He’s in the phase where
he thinks I’m the perfect
fucking woman,
and he does his
damndest
to keep my mind off you.
(He doesn’t know that.
But we do,
don’t we
baby.)
I’m already bored
so I feel like it’s your turn
to lick your palm, grab his dick,
give him a moment of pleasure
before I rip his guts out with
rusty salad tongs,
for shit you did.
See… he thinks he’s the one.
The. One.
He knows I’m The One
and, god, that sucks.
He thinks…
(soft chuckle)
Yeah.
We know
that’s fucking
stupid,
don’t we.
Baby.
Because
you’re the one.
You’re the fucking one.
He’s just the first.
sweet
soul
You know, the one
I’m using to
fuck you away?
Because I can
Because it’ll hurt
Because fuck us.
(Fuck us both.)
Anyhoo.
Him.
He’s in the phase where
he thinks I’m the perfect
fucking woman,
and he does his
damndest
to keep my mind off you.
(He doesn’t know that.
But we do,
don’t we
baby.)
I’m already bored
so I feel like it’s your turn
to lick your palm, grab his dick,
give him a moment of pleasure
before I rip his guts out with
rusty salad tongs,
for shit you did.
See… he thinks he’s the one.
The. One.
He knows I’m The One
and, god, that sucks.
He thinks…
(soft chuckle)
Yeah.
We know
that’s fucking
stupid,
don’t we.
Baby.
Because
you’re the one.
You’re the fucking one.
He’s just the first.
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Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
15th Mar 2024 9:25pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:49am
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15th Mar 2024 9:29pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:50am
I thought my feral phase was over, that the tides had calmed down.
But no.
I'm feeling stabby.
More than that, I'm feeling like slapping some fuckers awake.
Hold my beer, babe?
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
15th Mar 2024 9:33pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:51am
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
15th Mar 2024 11:57pm
I'm with Her on the stunning ferocity. You're a unique and stunning talent..
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20th Apr 2024 1:52am
Thanks Pink.
That is high fucking praise.
When everyone's talking about love and dicks and blow jobs, to be called unique is the best compliment on the planet.
You are a badass. Thank you.
That is high fucking praise.
When everyone's talking about love and dicks and blow jobs, to be called unique is the best compliment on the planet.
You are a badass. Thank you.
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
Anonymous
16th Mar 2024 2:54pm
The first...there's a truth. Cross purposes here. He's looking for more than you have available. So...the first. Sharp spiky edges in this one
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20th Apr 2024 1:53am
There's a truth in there somewhere.
I hope I can figure out where it is.
I feel spiky.
I'm glad it translated.
I hope I can figure out where it is.
I feel spiky.
I'm glad it translated.
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
16th Mar 2024 3:20pm
Re: Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
20th Apr 2024 1:54am
FUCK stupid ass men who cause rebounds. UGH. Fuck rebounds, too. Fuck them all.
I want a tentacle dildo so I can act out some Hentai fantasy shit, and a lesbian with daddy issues.
Fucking MEN!
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
16th Mar 2024 3:37pm
Makes me cringe...thinking about seeing The One in his eyes. The wrong HIM, I might add. Time to move on?
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20th Apr 2024 1:54am
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
17th Mar 2024 4:27am
Dear B,
This write made me recall all the under current of pain in a breakup and how it absolutely sucks. Especially while trying to mask it. The image I had in my head was of a cat swatting at a half dead bird she caught, and enjoying it at first but becoming aggravated the thing wouldn’t die quicker.
My sweet sweet Betty. You are an awesome writer. The feelings you can invoke…
H🌷
This write made me recall all the under current of pain in a breakup and how it absolutely sucks. Especially while trying to mask it. The image I had in my head was of a cat swatting at a half dead bird she caught, and enjoying it at first but becoming aggravated the thing wouldn’t die quicker.
My sweet sweet Betty. You are an awesome writer. The feelings you can invoke…
H🌷
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20th Apr 2024 1:55am
Thank you Hon. I've missed the fuck out of you and your sharp insight.
I appreciate you.
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
17th Mar 2024 1:40pm
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20th Apr 2024 1:56am
Thanks Thor.
I want to make a hammer-time joke. Because you know... Thor... hammer... MC Hammer.... eh fuck it.
CAN'T TOUCH THIS!
(Schwoops out in parachute pants)
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20th Apr 2024 2:42pm
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
20th Mar 2024 1:34am
Damn Betty.
Damn.
The brutality is massively displayed here. You slay with your writes.
Damn.
Damn.
The brutality is massively displayed here. You slay with your writes.
Damn.
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20th Apr 2024 1:57am
Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
19th Apr 2024 7:00pm
Re: Re. Isn’t it your turn to suck his dick?
20th Apr 2024 1:57am
Hey Sam.
You can cross me.
(sweet smile)
Once.
Thank you, darling, I appreciate it!
You can cross me.
(sweet smile)
Once.
Thank you, darling, I appreciate it!