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A David you're not
If you want to throw stones
at a giant
make sure there is a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits your target
Sling it in an arch
big enough
to make the degree scream
sign language to the deaf
Let the whistling of its trajectory
wake the earth
let every eye follow the arc
of its intended path
breaking sound barriers
along the way
If you want to sling stones
at a giant
make sure there’s a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits your target
Because if it’s still standing
then a David you’re not
which begs the question
to ask yourself:
Just whose side is God on
at a giant
make sure there is a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits your target
Sling it in an arch
big enough
to make the degree scream
sign language to the deaf
Let the whistling of its trajectory
wake the earth
let every eye follow the arc
of its intended path
breaking sound barriers
along the way
If you want to sling stones
at a giant
make sure there’s a volcano
in your palm
ready to erupt
when it hits your target
Because if it’s still standing
then a David you’re not
which begs the question
to ask yourself:
Just whose side is God on
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Re. A David you're not
11th Mar 2024 2:48pm
Right.
So much vituperation is a furious wind up and release, only to see the sling was empty all along.
So much vituperation is a furious wind up and release, only to see the sling was empty all along.
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Re: Re. A David you're not
12th Mar 2024 2:25pm
Re. A David you're not
11th Mar 2024 3:03pm
The style and word choice are reminiscent of passages in the book of Isaiah., which suits the giant theme.
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Re: Re. A David you're not
12th Mar 2024 2:25pm
Re. A David you're not
11th Mar 2024 11:27pm
in british mythology, the giants were defeated by ordinary men (and women!) and the chief giant was thrown over a cliff, and god knows whose side he’s on, but the giants lay stiff on the ground :)
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Re: Re. A David you're not
Giants can have many meanings, Paul. Size isn't necessarily one of them. ;) Though I do love mythology, and the fact that ordinary men and women were involved.
Re. A David you're not
12th Mar 2024 7:43pm
Brings back my "slingshot" days as a boy and bullies. Hugs and love, Oral
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12th Mar 2024 7:44pm
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Re: Re. A David you're not
17th Mar 2024 1:52pm
Holy crap! Now there's a ghost I hadn't seen in a LONG while! Welcome back, strangah! xo
Re. A David you're not
18th Mar 2024 00:56am
Cerebral, spiritual, ethereal and just down right true. Strong dear Ahavati. Felt this.
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