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Exercise Tiger
April 28, 1944
Devon, England
It was only a planned rehearsal
or so it was meant to be
taking place on the beach
of Slapton Sands, Devon
for the invasion of Normandy.
But coordination and communication
don’t always go as planned,
resulting in not only friendly-fire injuries
but the death of 749 American servicemen
by e-boats of Nazi Germany.
April 28, 1969
Devon, England
I was only ten-years-old
the first time I saw my father cry,
tears as warship missiles
launching from his eyes
down the channels
of creviced facial lines.
His grey irises became clouds
dispersing drops of water
from the curve
of his sharp jawline.
The shadow of a pillar
extended as a sky-scraper
high into the ether above me
names I could barely read
carved on its plate.
I was only ten-years-old
and yet I remember
just as he remembered
those who had lost
to so needless an error.
Because those who are honored
through our memory
can never forgotten
in our current reality.
I later learned
it was a massacre
silenced for decades.
I don't know why.
Whoever does
over something like this?
I imagine military forces
were embarrassed.
But they say the sacrifice
prevented even greater tragedy
across the bloody sands
of Normandy’s beach.
I'm not so certain
it's something I believe.
I am pretty certain
the families of the deceased
and my father's grief
would both agree with me.
Devon, England
It was only a planned rehearsal
or so it was meant to be
taking place on the beach
of Slapton Sands, Devon
for the invasion of Normandy.
But coordination and communication
don’t always go as planned,
resulting in not only friendly-fire injuries
but the death of 749 American servicemen
by e-boats of Nazi Germany.
April 28, 1969
Devon, England
I was only ten-years-old
the first time I saw my father cry,
tears as warship missiles
launching from his eyes
down the channels
of creviced facial lines.
His grey irises became clouds
dispersing drops of water
from the curve
of his sharp jawline.
The shadow of a pillar
extended as a sky-scraper
high into the ether above me
names I could barely read
carved on its plate.
I was only ten-years-old
and yet I remember
just as he remembered
those who had lost
to so needless an error.
Because those who are honored
through our memory
can never forgotten
in our current reality.
I later learned
it was a massacre
silenced for decades.
I don't know why.
Whoever does
over something like this?
I imagine military forces
were embarrassed.
But they say the sacrifice
prevented even greater tragedy
across the bloody sands
of Normandy’s beach.
I'm not so certain
it's something I believe.
I am pretty certain
the families of the deceased
and my father's grief
would both agree with me.
Author's Note
True story. Image Memorial to the 749 American servicemen who died at Slapton Sands, Devon, England, April 28, 1944.
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Re. Exercise Tiger
7th Mar 2024 00:51am
I already knew of this tragedy, but you have put it personally, and rather brilliantly ..
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7th Mar 2024 00:55am
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7th Mar 2024 1:03am
unfortunately not, the only time I’ve spent in Devon was whilst walking around Exmoor
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Most folks are totally unaware of just how massive the scale of the second world war really was.
I read a lot about it when I was younger but I am still learning about things, like this.
History is a lifetime consuming education, which is why so many folks find it so daunting to even begin to study, yet study we must, or risk the fate of the vacuous.
I read a lot about it when I was younger but I am still learning about things, like this.
History is a lifetime consuming education, which is why so many folks find it so daunting to even begin to study, yet study we must, or risk the fate of the vacuous.
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7th Mar 2024 1:21am
I agree. It was massive and there's so much that we didn't know, ergo, Exercise Tiger. And, unfortunately, history belongs to the victor, so there are some things I fear we will never learn the truth about.
I truly contemplated on whether or not to write this but I have a book of my experiences with my father and his teachings, mostly over games of chess. I always meant to write poems about them one day, and today seemed as good as any.
Thank you.
I truly contemplated on whether or not to write this but I have a book of my experiences with my father and his teachings, mostly over games of chess. I always meant to write poems about them one day, and today seemed as good as any.
Thank you.
Re. Exercise Tiger
7th Mar 2024 1:31am
that war was very pivotal it was a scuffle for world wide power I believe...you have to write what is on your heart beautiful Ahavati...I hope as humans we have learned something but I fear people just want to erase history and forget history... you are a tome keeper... you have to write this is powerful 💕
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7th Mar 2024 1:38am
Thank you, Bren. It's true that those my age are the timekeepers of historical experience, a privilege not afforded to everyone. That's why I don't mind aging one damn bit. And, you are right, this needed to be written. I should honor my experiences in the Book of my Father and Me ( what I titled the journal ).
Thank you for such a kind and thoughtful comment. xo
Thank you for such a kind and thoughtful comment. xo
Re. Exercise Tiger
7th Mar 2024 6:25am
Dear A,
This write did need to be told but it made me cry. It’s an amazing story and I know there are so many more like it but it’s gutting for me to think of all those who were lost for sake of “math”. Outstanding piece. H🌷
This write did need to be told but it made me cry. It’s an amazing story and I know there are so many more like it but it’s gutting for me to think of all those who were lost for sake of “math”. Outstanding piece. H🌷
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7th Mar 2024 2:30pm
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A good historical poem, giving relevant detail for the poem, but not so much as to obviate the need for an interested reader to look for more detailed information. I like the repetition of “I was only ten years old”. The fact that ten years old is recounting an event “from the adult world, so to speak, adds poignancy.
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7th Mar 2024 9:30pm
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Such a profound piece Ahavati, reading it made me take pause for a bit.
Years ago I met some American Veterans (easy company) and the stories they told were deeply moving, it moved them too. We should never forget World War II (and the other ones) and the ones who lost their lives, fighting for our countries.
Thank you for sharing a part of your history <3
Years ago I met some American Veterans (easy company) and the stories they told were deeply moving, it moved them too. We should never forget World War II (and the other ones) and the ones who lost their lives, fighting for our countries.
Thank you for sharing a part of your history <3
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9th Mar 2024 10:31pm
Thank you so much, Duende. No, we should never forget lest we repeat the same things over and over again. Unfortunately, I believe it's coming to pass.
I appreciate your insights.
I appreciate your insights.
Re. Exercise Tiger
9th Mar 2024 8:44pm
It's evokes such a powerful image when a man returns to a certain place and the memories of such horrors are overwhelming. Your account of his reaction must have been a pivotal point in storing those memories of him, not knowing what he experienced but in that for whatever stoicism these men kept, deep down inside their humanity was tested.
Thank you for sharing.
Thank you for sharing.
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9th Mar 2024 10:33pm
Thank you for your observations, Wally. They are deeply appreciated. The main thing I remember about my father is him telling me the war never ends for someone who fought it. That's stayed with me for life.
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9th Mar 2024 11:43pm
The title also reminded me of Pink Floyd's When the Tigers Broke Free, where Roger Waters' father died in the Battle of Anzio that same year. War has lasting effects on many, which is why I think vets should always have the resources they need when they come home.
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10th Mar 2024 2:52pm
I actually thought of that song too, Wally. How we treat our elderly and Veterans is a shame in this country. It's like, "We don't need you anymore. Bye!"
Re. Exercise Tiger
9th Mar 2024 10:38pm
Beautiful. Stunning the way you capture your father's grief. I also know Devon very well as I did my music degree at Dartington.
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10th Mar 2024 2:52pm
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10th Mar 2024 7:50pm
Well, I'm not sure it's well known or even cared about there. Now, had it been British servicemen, maybe. Or maybe not. The war seems a passing history that not many care about.
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10th Mar 2024 11:36pm
I think it was a few miles from Totnes/Dartington (judging from what I looked up online earlier), but I honestly hadn't heard of it back then. If I go back to Devon for a visit, I'll look it out.
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10th Mar 2024 11:44pm
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17th Mar 2024 00:03am
It's actually very sad to me that war exists across the world, and throughout time, even though I did nine years worth of Army. I saw so much absolute loss. It crushes your chest.
Your write is a magnificent example of how we honor those gone. You did a fantastic job with it.
Your write is a magnificent example of how we honor those gone. You did a fantastic job with it.
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17th Mar 2024 2:06pm
I'm right with you, Styxian. I read your story yesterday, and I'm sure it's only a fraction of what you endured. My father told me once that the war never ended for those who served. I believe it and am appalled at the lack of gratitude our country seems to have for our veterans. They should have golden toilets to sit on.
Thank you for the kind words and RL, you are always welcome here. And thank you most of all for your service to our country. It is appreciated deeply, even if at times it doesn't appear to be.
Thank you for the kind words and RL, you are always welcome here. And thank you most of all for your service to our country. It is appreciated deeply, even if at times it doesn't appear to be.