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What a day
What a day
Nothing is going my way
Charges was drop
Im still going nonstop
For what
Everything is so fucked up
Dont know what to do
Feeling so lost and confused
Do I stay or do I go
Damn this shit really blows
Im tired of crying
Saying Im ok, but i just be lying
Feeling so empty inside
My kids give me the strength to get by
I pray every night
feeling like im fighting for my life
Nothing is going my way
Charges was drop
Im still going nonstop
For what
Everything is so fucked up
Dont know what to do
Feeling so lost and confused
Do I stay or do I go
Damn this shit really blows
Im tired of crying
Saying Im ok, but i just be lying
Feeling so empty inside
My kids give me the strength to get by
I pray every night
feeling like im fighting for my life
Published 2nd May 2012
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2nd May 2012 8:44pm
The wording promotes a frustration that can be applied to so many aspects of life---love life, work, etc.
Your comment about "my kids", is also something many can relate to. (I felt like that often in the classroom, even though technically the kids weren't mine)
Now the last sentence is a bit sad especially if meant literally...
Your comment about "my kids", is also something many can relate to. (I felt like that often in the classroom, even though technically the kids weren't mine)
Now the last sentence is a bit sad especially if meant literally...
2nd May 2012 8:53pm
Im just stress and it seems like Im always fighting to stay on top. thanks for commenting JAZZMANOR
2nd May 2012 10:52pm
1. You are never bought to anything that the master can't pull you through.
2. You words and feelings can serve to be a great catharsis for your situation.
Everything is gonna' be allright. "Hold on, change is coming. Hold on...don't worry about a thing. Hold on.....you can make it. Hold on....everything gonna' be allright"
So much simple truth in those words to those who believe. : )
2. You words and feelings can serve to be a great catharsis for your situation.
Everything is gonna' be allright. "Hold on, change is coming. Hold on...don't worry about a thing. Hold on.....you can make it. Hold on....everything gonna' be allright"
So much simple truth in those words to those who believe. : )
2nd May 2012 11:00pm
Anonymous
3rd May 2012 4:41pm
There is always hope in prayer. Your kids will always see you thru. Their unconditional love is always there. :)
3rd May 2012 5:08pm
