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ain't life funny
ain't life funny,
over ten years later
when the season is sunny
not sure what I feel, besides surreal
every day is new, walking down this avenue
quiet
sensitive
kind
funny
I have no clue
but I'm enjoying getting to know you
over ten years later
when the season is sunny
not sure what I feel, besides surreal
every day is new, walking down this avenue
quiet
sensitive
kind
funny
I have no clue
but I'm enjoying getting to know you
Published 27th Feb 2024
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27th Feb 2024 6:01am
Dear F,
I enjoyed your poem. It made me think of second chances and an opportunity to do something differently. Your upbeat subject and meter were great. Lovely write. Welcome to DU.
H🌷
I enjoyed your poem. It made me think of second chances and an opportunity to do something differently. Your upbeat subject and meter were great. Lovely write. Welcome to DU.
H🌷
27th Feb 2024 1:11pm
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10th Mar 2024 8:30am
At times it can feel like every day is a new beginning.
Nicely crafted piece. Welcome to DUP.
Nicely crafted piece. Welcome to DUP.
10th Mar 2024 3:01pm
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