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DON'T LEAVE IT HANGING
I see
your eyes
fixed on it,
YES
it is different,
perhaps one
of a kind,
I know what
you want to
say or ask;
so go ahead
and ask.
"Will you let
me borrow your
collectors guitar hanging
on the wall in your music store;
PLEASE
don't leave
it hanging for
someone else.
I want to strum
and play with it
OKAY?"
your eyes
fixed on it,
YES
it is different,
perhaps one
of a kind,
I know what
you want to
say or ask;
so go ahead
and ask.
"Will you let
me borrow your
collectors guitar hanging
on the wall in your music store;
PLEASE
don't leave
it hanging for
someone else.
I want to strum
and play with it
OKAY?"
Published 27th Feb 2024
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27th Feb 2024 00:44am
Was it a Gibson Les Paul Gold Top guitar that you strummed? I Hope so cos they are one of the best. One will only set you back $2,960 but hey, it's gonna look good hanging on your wall, right? Loads of people will want to strum it, including me! Lol. 😉
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27th Feb 2024 6:10am
Dear TO,
Not gonna lie there was a fabulous double entendres vibe going on in the write for me. I enjoyed the desirous need for that guitar and music making. Life’s no fun without it. Terrific piece.
H🌷
Not gonna lie there was a fabulous double entendres vibe going on in the write for me. I enjoyed the desirous need for that guitar and music making. Life’s no fun without it. Terrific piece.
H🌷
27th Feb 2024 12:42pm
