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Hunger
I look to you and know you're gone
and I'm alone again
life is filling you up and you no longer seek me out
I knew when you first left
I felt cold
it was time for you to move on
as people do
I am a relic used to my set ways
the volatile world isn't for me
chaos is fun but I am dangerous
unpredictable at best
my shadow keeps me company
it knows all my secrets
she will greet you should you come again
when you need shade to shelter
from the fullness
and hunger of the world
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Re. Hunger
25th Feb 2024 9:53pm
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25th Feb 2024 10:51pm
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25th Feb 2024 10:52pm
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25th Feb 2024 10:56pm
Thank you. Yes,I am enjoying the first day of the rest of my life. Thanks for your contribution to it. Hugs and love. Oral
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25th Feb 2024 10:58pm
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25th Feb 2024 11:26pm
something about your comment suggested you were embarking on something special...
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25th Feb 2024 11:49pm
Your so consistent Crimsin. Every one of your poems never fails. There always executed perfectly.
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26th Feb 2024 1:19am
thank you graciously dearest Visions I don't always feel like it I'm happy you see from a different perspective 💕
Re. Hunger
27th Feb 2024 9:59pm
The highs and lows of relationship seem to have more weight on the downslopes, requiring more momentum to get out of them.
Well penned.
Well penned.
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27th Feb 2024 11:11pm
thank you dearest Wally I get distracted sometimes...I am happy enough most days 💕