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Ghosts and Shadows
silently you retreated to the shadows
while I was distracted by the noise
I didn't see you fade
slowly into the grey
you emerged to tell me you love me
then quietly disappeared
I wish you hadn't made me aware of you
now, I feel something deep for you
my heart considers you a part of my soul
tenderly and gently admonishing me
when I disregard my feelings
it hurts knowing you care
even as broken as I am
you showed me, love,
I felt beautiful for a moment
captured in your stare
but like a ghost, you dissolve into the mists
leaving me alone
now my soul can't find you
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Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 3:31am
Are you sure this wasn't a dream, crimsin? Either way, I found it hauntingly beautiful & I swear it left me involuntarily open-mouthed as I read the lines. :-)
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Re: Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 3:48pm
thank you dearest Billy for reading and leaving your thoughts no, it wasn't a dream I'm happy this poem had that effect on you 💕
Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 9:53am
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20th Feb 2024 3:48pm
Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 11:39am
Those second and fourth stanzas made me catch my breath. Your writing is so exquisite in its vulnerability.
And btw, you are beautiful💕
And btw, you are beautiful💕
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Re: Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 3:49pm
hello beautiful Her good morning thank you I'm happy this spoke to you 💕I deeply appreciate the love it's felt...
Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 3:21pm
"Be still and know that I am there." was the first thing that popped into my mind when reading this. xo
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Re: Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 3:47pm
good morning beautiful Ahavati what a beautiful thought thank you I deeply appreciate your insight 💕
Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 4:20pm
Ethereal. That's the word that comes to mind. Beautiful, haunting & bittersweet
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Re: Re. Ghosts and Shadows
20th Feb 2024 4:23pm
thank you graciously beautiful Willow I hope you're going to post soon I am looking forward to your words 💕
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25th Feb 2024 7:32am
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27th Feb 2024 3:50pm
Re. Ghosts and Shadows
27th Feb 2024 6:01am
"but like a ghost, you dissolve into the mists
leaving me alone
now my soul can't find you"
It's a beautiful piece that is also filled with nostalgia and aching, especially in this closing stanza.
leaving me alone
now my soul can't find you"
It's a beautiful piece that is also filled with nostalgia and aching, especially in this closing stanza.
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27th Feb 2024 3:51pm