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Just A Brown Eyed Girl (Pint-Sized Poem # 27)
Brown eyes.
Wise eyes.
Eyes that see...
People as they truely are,
or as they choose to be.
Brown eyes.
Loving eyes.
Warm eyes.
Caring eyes.
Eyes that will cry for someone,
even if that person tells nothing but lies.
Brown eyes.
Shining eyes.
Glowing gold in sunlight.
Brown eyes.
Hazel eyes.
Gold eyes.
Make up your mind?
Brown eyes.
Sad eyes.
Dark eyes.
Lone eyes.
Stolen eyes.
Broken eyes.
Eyes that see.
Eyes that spy.
Eyes that cheat.
Eyes that cry.
These are my eyes.
If you were to see through them.
Then you'd know.
Nothing is what it seems.
I mean... Take it from me.
I should know.
But then again...
To you, I am nothing.
Nothing.... Just a brown eyed girl.
Written for "The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly" Competition.
Wise eyes.
Eyes that see...
People as they truely are,
or as they choose to be.
Brown eyes.
Loving eyes.
Warm eyes.
Caring eyes.
Eyes that will cry for someone,
even if that person tells nothing but lies.
Brown eyes.
Shining eyes.
Glowing gold in sunlight.
Brown eyes.
Hazel eyes.
Gold eyes.
Make up your mind?
Brown eyes.
Sad eyes.
Dark eyes.
Lone eyes.
Stolen eyes.
Broken eyes.
Eyes that see.
Eyes that spy.
Eyes that cheat.
Eyes that cry.
These are my eyes.
If you were to see through them.
Then you'd know.
Nothing is what it seems.
I mean... Take it from me.
I should know.
But then again...
To you, I am nothing.
Nothing.... Just a brown eyed girl.
Written for "The Good, the Bad, and the Ugly" Competition.
Published 1st May 2012
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1st May 2012 2:56pm
Ms Rider, a salute for yet another fantastic write. I have been playing around with a few ideas for works including eyes but you have managed to say it so beautifully, so passionately and so eloquently that anything I could manage would be but a mere shaddow to this. The structure is extremely astute.
Thank you, as always. for sharing
D x
Thank you, as always. for sharing
D x
