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no dimension
no dimension
no connection
conversations with a wall
now or later
in your favor
words slip away
with the warmth of fall
no connection
conversations with a wall
now or later
in your favor
words slip away
with the warmth of fall
Published 14th Feb 2024
Author's Note
written september 18th, 2022.
a free verse poem, this may be interpreted however you like. this poem is rooted in chremamorphism. it illustrates a relationship that lacks communication, causing you to feel lonely and unheard.
-hope
a free verse poem, this may be interpreted however you like. this poem is rooted in chremamorphism. it illustrates a relationship that lacks communication, causing you to feel lonely and unheard.
-hope
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14th Feb 2024 4:27am
Dear A,
Interesting perspective in this poem. The first three lines are so direct. The last four are terrific poetic in describing communication breakdown. I enjoyed your spin on this situation. Great piece. H🌷
Interesting perspective in this poem. The first three lines are so direct. The last four are terrific poetic in describing communication breakdown. I enjoyed your spin on this situation. Great piece. H🌷
14th Feb 2024 3:47pm
hi, i usually write more metaphorically, this one was something a bit different. thank you very much! i truly appreciate it.
-hope
-hope
14th Feb 2024 4:28am
my favorite psychiatrist is my green black metal chair it listens better than anyone...
10th Apr 2024 5:24am
OMG… I’ve been talking to wall all my life and haven’t realized it… thank you for that insight
