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Peaceful Thrill
The crabapple tree,
barren of a single leaf's life.
But instead, was elegantly bathed
in pale soft moonlight.
Helpless was my famished sight.
It began as a trance of delight
Sometimes it's the mere daylight
that frightens.
While the newborn night enlightens.
The quiet still seeps into me
A peaceful thrill.
My violet veins seize.
There needs to be a greed for peace.
barren of a single leaf's life.
But instead, was elegantly bathed
in pale soft moonlight.
Helpless was my famished sight.
It began as a trance of delight
Sometimes it's the mere daylight
that frightens.
While the newborn night enlightens.
The quiet still seeps into me
A peaceful thrill.
My violet veins seize.
There needs to be a greed for peace.
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12th Feb 2024 8:01pm
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12th Feb 2024 8:07pm
Thank you! I screwed up my DUP page, I hit something and now the text is like ants and I can't fix it. I messaged for help.
That was really nice what you said, was a little hesitant to post that, felt like it needed more.
That was really nice what you said, was a little hesitant to post that, felt like it needed more.
Re. Peaceful Thrill
12th Feb 2024 8:09pm
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12th Feb 2024 8:14pm
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12th Feb 2024 10:11pm
It's certainly not barren of feeling. I'm only sorry the sunlight ruined everything, lol. Excellent stuff, my nocturnal poet. ;-)
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13th Feb 2024 00:45am
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13th Feb 2024 00:52am
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13th Feb 2024 8:59am
Thank you my friend for being so kind and so encouraging to me.
There exist no words to express how much it means. ❤️
There exist no words to express how much it means. ❤️
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13th Feb 2024 1:01am
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 6:23am
'' A peaceful thrill.
My violet veins seize.
There needs to be a greed for peace.''
This is sublime poetry at its best
Much respect
Naaj
My violet veins seize.
There needs to be a greed for peace.''
This is sublime poetry at its best
Much respect
Naaj
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13th Feb 2024 9:02am
You are too kind. Thank you.
I thought the " violet veins" might be a little out there, but f- it, went with it, lol
Appreciate you stopping bye!
I thought the " violet veins" might be a little out there, but f- it, went with it, lol
Appreciate you stopping bye!
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Anonymous
13th Feb 2024 3:45pm
Absolutely beautiful. Could feel the moonlight through the naked branches in this
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13th Feb 2024 3:52pm
I'm so happy to hear that. I like to share the beauty of what I observe in the world. Appreciate you checking out.
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15th Feb 2024 11:43am