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black waters

i dreamed    
last night,    
as if  
i was    
floating over    
your ocean,    
the sky    
was clear,    
the moon    
was lit,    
but,    
the waters,    
they themselves    
were black    
and    
as i dreamed,    
you were    
there,    
you in    
your antique    
boat, sails    
heavy with    
wind,    
each glimpse    
that came    
from    
the moon    
saw you    
closer    
to your ideas    
of what    
you hoped    
to find.
Written by wolfatthedoor1966
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Author's Note
the idea of this poem came to me after reading LittleDragonFly's A Sea Of Ink.
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