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Zipper
on her knees
she felt the cold steel
pressed against her skull
breathing deeply
closing her eyes
ready for the inevitable
“put down the gun”
she said calmly
“and take out your cock”
“holding that gun,
instead of your cock,
all you can do is
kill me,
turn me into a piece
of cold dead meat.
but, with your cock,
you can touch
the universe”
closing her eyes
ready for the inevitable
she heard the sound of a zipper
© 2024 Raibeart Bruis
she felt the cold steel
pressed against her skull
breathing deeply
closing her eyes
ready for the inevitable
“put down the gun”
she said calmly
“and take out your cock”
“holding that gun,
instead of your cock,
all you can do is
kill me,
turn me into a piece
of cold dead meat.
but, with your cock,
you can touch
the universe”
closing her eyes
ready for the inevitable
she heard the sound of a zipper
© 2024 Raibeart Bruis
Published 1st Feb 2024
Author's Note
Definitely from a dark corner in a dark alley of my mind.
Isn’t it interesting that if this was a scene in a television show, there would be a warning about sexual content, but no warning about violence, unless someone was beaten to a pulp or their brains blown out.
Isn’t it interesting that if this was a scene in a television show, there would be a warning about sexual content, but no warning about violence, unless someone was beaten to a pulp or their brains blown out.
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1st Feb 2024 3:12pm
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1st Feb 2024 8:41pm
Fucking hell, this is awesomely graphic, gutting, morally evocative when you start thinking just how far you too, would go to survive.... Pushing past your own fear, outrage and disgust... to be able to take another new breath...
It's that mind fuck, that people get shivers by.
Yeah, I hear you, KP... You're absolutely right that standards and practices would say it's the sex that's an issue not the fucking incredibly brutal violence.... pffttt, my god, that's so so telling, innit!!?
This was stellar.
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It's that mind fuck, that people get shivers by.
Yeah, I hear you, KP... You're absolutely right that standards and practices would say it's the sex that's an issue not the fucking incredibly brutal violence.... pffttt, my god, that's so so telling, innit!!?
This was stellar.
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2nd Feb 2024 1:51am
Underneath the pitch-black beauty of this is a pragmatic solution to a problem. It feels like a solution that could save a woman's life, and perhaps has, more than once. A very impactful write.
