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Perfectly Objective Subject
reader reads aloud
objectifying
subjective pleasure of reading
poetry written devoid
of desire to move another’s will
or mold their understanding
every creative work
imperfect
dubious aesthetic
subjective contemplation
on objects
is what we write
everything is imperfect
no sunset so lovely
it couldn’t
become lovelier
gentle breezes
bringing sleep could
bring sounder sleep
contemplators
of paintings and rivers
enjoying books and passing days
dreaming all things
transforming them
into their own being
scribing descriptions
analyses
that become extraneous
tales enjoyed
as if they happened
all in a single perfect day
© 2024 Raibeart Bruis
objectifying
subjective pleasure of reading
poetry written devoid
of desire to move another’s will
or mold their understanding
every creative work
imperfect
dubious aesthetic
subjective contemplation
on objects
is what we write
everything is imperfect
no sunset so lovely
it couldn’t
become lovelier
gentle breezes
bringing sleep could
bring sounder sleep
contemplators
of paintings and rivers
enjoying books and passing days
dreaming all things
transforming them
into their own being
scribing descriptions
analyses
that become extraneous
tales enjoyed
as if they happened
all in a single perfect day
© 2024 Raibeart Bruis
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