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One night stand-in
I see you cross legged on the floor
wondering if I'm ever going to
if I'm ever going to
(no)
but you have those
offering eyes
follow me like
velvet Jesus
around a
priest's main office
and I confess.
I confess.
That I want you
(to be him)
for the night.
I want to crawl into your lap
long legs,
long hair,
long time alone,
and lose it all as your tongue
traces the hollow at my neck.
Close your ears tonight
in case some
wayward sighs
(his name)
fall across my swollen lips;
because it's worth waking up
in the morning
with the skin of your mind
curled under my nails
and the curve of my
body curing
your restless
intentions
you feel me tremble
as I reach between us
draw you in
and move;
the back of my neck
is humid with need
and your bottom lip
fits between my teeth
and I confess gently
as hips
batter
truth
and
there
yes
god
now
please...
understand
that I need
you
(to be him)
just for tonight
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Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 4:06pm
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 4:08pm
good morning beautiful I swear we were on the same wavelength I wrote something not as good as this but with the same vibe last night I haven't posted it yet mine is a little porno esque and I'm not sure about it... this is so beautiful in its need to have this person close to you for the night so many great lines I love velvet Jesure eyes wow... have a wonderful day today lovely one 💕
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:40pm
Thank you darling. I love porn! It’s the best! Using erotica to craft words is a skill. And you are amazing at that.
Re. One night stand-in
Anonymous
26th Jan 2024 5:28pm
This has definitely given me some added insights
of what may cross a woman's mind
within those deep passionate moments
Damn this is one sexy ride!
Whew!!
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:41pm
To keep your ego intact:Never ask what’s behind the closed eyes. Just accept what’s between the open legs…
Or something like that
Or something like that
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 6:02pm
Sometime you just need someone to fill in at that crucial moment. Please don't try to be him or her, talk like them, make us smile the way that they did. We just need that pain, that exhaustive pleasure that only they could deliver and only for tonight. Tight one Lady
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:42pm
Yes! Exactly. Just… be a warm, hairy dildo I can cuddle with after I use you. Just… shhhhh. Be not him. Thank you my friend!
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 6:55pm
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 7:42pm
Re: Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:44pm
Yeah, I’m fond of them too.
Instead of me hitting and quitting you in a single night…I need to hit and quit him with your dick.
Or something like that
(beams innocently)
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:47pm
Re: Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:50pm
Listen, I… me… a fucking goddess among humankind got dumped by an average dude.
Me.
You think I’m not about to make all of mankind bleed for it?
You’ll take it.
And you’ll love it.
Stand still.
Re: Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 10:18pm
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 9:52pm
Yes, the warmth of the stand-in can appease.
My problem was I was juggling too many stand-ins just to capture the absence of my Kryptonite. Stand-ins are meant to be short-term. Making a long string of them can be destructive.
Don’t lose sight of yourself, girl.
I totally feel you on this one.
My problem was I was juggling too many stand-ins just to capture the absence of my Kryptonite. Stand-ins are meant to be short-term. Making a long string of them can be destructive.
Don’t lose sight of yourself, girl.
I totally feel you on this one.
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
Babydoll, I lost sight of myself when I capitulated, and accepted less than I'm worth.
I am most alive alone. But I don't mind a little revivification with a broad chest. Or hell, with silky thighs.
Thanks for watching out for me.
I am most alive alone. But I don't mind a little revivification with a broad chest. Or hell, with silky thighs.
Thanks for watching out for me.
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 10:19pm
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26th Jan 2024 11:21pm
Re. One night stand-in
26th Jan 2024 10:26pm
Honestly, Mr Temporary should be fucking grateful for the night. The emotions packed into this guarantee one helluva ride. As long as he keeps his mouth shut & gives you free reign, he can't lose. Feeling the need & the pain in this one like you ran over me with a semi
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Mr. Right Now is usually fucking grateful.
Mr. Right? Fucker.
I hope he spends his life trying to find a woman like me, in all of time, in all of creation.
Thank you for the comment, the empathy, and the understanding.
Mr. Right? Fucker.
I hope he spends his life trying to find a woman like me, in all of time, in all of creation.
Thank you for the comment, the empathy, and the understanding.
Re. One night stand-in
27th Jan 2024 00:05am
Re: Re. One night stand-in
27th Jan 2024 00:59am
Omg, that lame pun made me laugh out loud. I’m a sucker for a bad joke.
Thank you. The double entendre’ delighted me in more than one way….
Thank you. The double entendre’ delighted me in more than one way….
Re. One night stand-in
27th Jan 2024 2:55pm
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27th Jan 2024 8:53pm
A delightful way to describe friends ... with benefits.
Am I in a good mood? You're the second person who made me smile. Huh. Maybe there's a light at the end of a spare brain-dick after all.
Am I in a good mood? You're the second person who made me smile. Huh. Maybe there's a light at the end of a spare brain-dick after all.
Re. One night stand-in
Anonymous
27th Jan 2024 3:19pm
Don't ask questions...just be present. That's all that's needed from him. Solid piece
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27th Jan 2024 8:54pm
Re. One night stand-in
There's this kind of unspoken deep internal satisfaction/healing that you get when you gain the wisdom and soothing insight of a killer rebound. I not only deeply appreciate those hookups with Mr or Mrs 'right now' but I also recognize just how very cathartic, honest and needed those interactions are. They're fucking freeing, imo! I wholeheartedly feel that getting under someone in a shattering release of 'play time' is essential for getting over the heavy hurt that can stick around with shattering heartbreak A life lesson which took me a while to understand because my own warped life scars infuriatingly stood in the way. I guess they're right.... time can sorta heal all wounds.... in a way.
You're a beacon of super relatable ink that always leaves me nodding in solidarity and awe at it's stellar quality.
I feel extraordinarily lucky to be able to take part in reading you, B.
Thanks for sharing your humanity.
I'm always here reading
🌹💙 - B
You're a beacon of super relatable ink that always leaves me nodding in solidarity and awe at it's stellar quality.
I feel extraordinarily lucky to be able to take part in reading you, B.
Thanks for sharing your humanity.
I'm always here reading
🌹💙 - B
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
27th Jan 2024 8:57pm
Fuck yes, just for nothing more, the art of play allows you to remember you're real beyond your desire for a lost love. We get so consumed with becoming part of a person, and when they're gone it's so... empty. So lost. Everything is hollow. Food sucks. Books suck. Life sucks.
The little flicker of consensual use... reminds us that it doesn't suck. It's real. And beautiful. And ours for the taking.
I feel you my beautiful friend. I do. I'm always glad to see you, and I'm always wishing you the best when I don't.
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
28th Jan 2024 2:09am
Fucking hell, ethan. That was cold water on my tits.
I'd never heard Groove Armada, ever, and this song is my current spirit animal. I'm seriously listening on repeat right now and the hair on my arms is sticking up. IT'S SO GOOD!
Perfectly paired. Thank you. I didn't know I needed that.
I appreciate you.
I'd never heard Groove Armada, ever, and this song is my current spirit animal. I'm seriously listening on repeat right now and the hair on my arms is sticking up. IT'S SO GOOD!
Perfectly paired. Thank you. I didn't know I needed that.
I appreciate you.
Re. One night stand-in
28th Jan 2024 2:57am
Dear B,
How. Many. Times. I’ve been in this same space? Lost count. That anyone could write it out with such lusty poignancy is utterly remarkable. I thank you. This head space totally sucks, that it’s been let out in this poetic fashion is relief. I bow down madame. H🌷
How. Many. Times. I’ve been in this same space? Lost count. That anyone could write it out with such lusty poignancy is utterly remarkable. I thank you. This head space totally sucks, that it’s been let out in this poetic fashion is relief. I bow down madame. H🌷
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
28th Jan 2024 3:15am
Re. One night stand-in
3rd Feb 2024 5:08pm
You know what coursed through a frozen expanse of the Kingdom on Anhedonia within my head that once was the meeting point of Joie de vivvre and Eros:
"because it's worth waking up
in the morning
with the skin of your mind
curled under my nails
and the curve of my
body curing"
And
"the back of my neck
is humid with need
your restless
intentions"
In another universe, I have written this poem and now I am wiping the kohl off my eyes, giddy, delirious with tangible joy, intoxicated with an unnameable feeling, knowing that my verses will become the soft pillows that would aid the inner child of many.
I will return to my world full of longing and that brazen will to stir others from whatever has kept them down. Yes, that's my love for you, Ugly.
Until next time.
Your secret Lazarus
P.S: Make it inviting instead of offering?
"because it's worth waking up
in the morning
with the skin of your mind
curled under my nails
and the curve of my
body curing"
And
"the back of my neck
is humid with need
your restless
intentions"
In another universe, I have written this poem and now I am wiping the kohl off my eyes, giddy, delirious with tangible joy, intoxicated with an unnameable feeling, knowing that my verses will become the soft pillows that would aid the inner child of many.
I will return to my world full of longing and that brazen will to stir others from whatever has kept them down. Yes, that's my love for you, Ugly.
Until next time.
Your secret Lazarus
P.S: Make it inviting instead of offering?
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Re: Re. One night stand-in
7th Feb 2024 3:16am
Nerd!
We've been dancing in each other's shadows for aeons.
Was it Vonnegut who talked about the soul-connection that excludes the world? Maybe, I forget. You are one of those soul-beams in my world.
Decades pass, and yet, the way your mind curls under my nails is worth it, my dearest friend.
The fuck you been?
We've been dancing in each other's shadows for aeons.
Was it Vonnegut who talked about the soul-connection that excludes the world? Maybe, I forget. You are one of those soul-beams in my world.
Decades pass, and yet, the way your mind curls under my nails is worth it, my dearest friend.
The fuck you been?
Re. One night stand-in
19th Apr 2024 6:58pm