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A whimsical erotic free write:) PS. I would like your suggestions for a potential title!
Our lips meet,
And suddenly you’ve got my whole body on fire..
My senses reeling.
My heart, racing.
My mind, pacing.
This is obscure,
I have to have you…
You pull away from our kiss,
Exhaling in pleasure into my ears,
Bringing your nose to my neck,
rolling your eyes up as though you’re drunk on the very scent of mine.
Oh when you open your eyes,
My stomach’s in knots,
Wondering what you are,
How you might have this affect on me..
“Fuck..”
I don’t have time to listen to my fears.
Your lips meet mine again,
Your tongue dancing in my mouth.
Kissing you makes my blood hot,
I feel it rushing and pounding all over my body,
As you push yourself against me,
Greedily demanding more…
My whole body swells as you devour me down.
I love feeling you’re hands firmly around my face,
taking what you want.
Suddenly,
you move to the buttons of my shirt,
With a single pull,
you rip them clean off
Admiring me.
Your eyes on mine.
Wide and wild.
I realise..I’m gone, long gone.
All yours for this moment and more to arrive,
That is.. if you’ll have me.
- By Sam ( the lovesickgymrat)
And suddenly you’ve got my whole body on fire..
My senses reeling.
My heart, racing.
My mind, pacing.
This is obscure,
I have to have you…
You pull away from our kiss,
Exhaling in pleasure into my ears,
Bringing your nose to my neck,
rolling your eyes up as though you’re drunk on the very scent of mine.
Oh when you open your eyes,
My stomach’s in knots,
Wondering what you are,
How you might have this affect on me..
“Fuck..”
I don’t have time to listen to my fears.
Your lips meet mine again,
Your tongue dancing in my mouth.
Kissing you makes my blood hot,
I feel it rushing and pounding all over my body,
As you push yourself against me,
Greedily demanding more…
My whole body swells as you devour me down.
I love feeling you’re hands firmly around my face,
taking what you want.
Suddenly,
you move to the buttons of my shirt,
With a single pull,
you rip them clean off
Admiring me.
Your eyes on mine.
Wide and wild.
I realise..I’m gone, long gone.
All yours for this moment and more to arrive,
That is.. if you’ll have me.
- By Sam ( the lovesickgymrat)
Published 20th Jan 2024
Author's Note
Within a newfound passion or desire, individuals often find themselves stuck in a contemplation, grappling with the unfamiliar sensation of vulnerability and submission. It is a grappling sensation that, at some point, we all might have experienced at a certain stage of life, that mysterious moment where love or yearning for another leaves us not only captivated but also, in a way, rendered powerless. If this scenario hasn't personally unfolded in your life, take a moment to read and envisage it. The alluring, all encompassing point of connection and realisation which has the potential to leave us momentarily incapacitated and lost to that individual..
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- Edited 23rd Nov 2024 2:46am
20th Jan 2024 6:16pm
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21st Jan 2024 2:55pm
Haha, thats true its certainly not the main focus. Thank you so much, I appreciate your input:))
20th Jan 2024 8:38pm
Congratulations on publishing your first DU poem!
I love your use of anticipation to guide the reader along the narrow passageway between desire and the senses. Beautiful write!
I love your use of anticipation to guide the reader along the narrow passageway between desire and the senses. Beautiful write!
21st Jan 2024 2:54pm
Thank you so much, I appreciate you. Looking forward to reading more of your work as well, was a delight reading through a couple last night:))
Anonymous
21st Jan 2024 1:12am
Love your first post!
Honestly, perhaps simply “An Erotic Free Write” would be fine. I agree with Poetic Quill, the last thing I was thinking of was a title.
Nicely done.
Honestly, perhaps simply “An Erotic Free Write” would be fine. I agree with Poetic Quill, the last thing I was thinking of was a title.
Nicely done.
21st Jan 2024 2:58pm
Why thank you for your suggestion!. Haha, absolutely. I appreciate your feedback, looking forward to reading more from you!
