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fish ‘n chips
salt and pepper and vinegar
and brown sauce made up most of our dinner
and it wasn’t even dinner
since we had it for
tea
no one drank
coffee
Published 14th Jan 2024
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15th Jan 2024 2:41am
I wish I could read more. There is something very intriguing about this and the success I think really is in the subtly. The gaps between each sparse line. It really starts the brain wondering what was happening here. So I hope there is more later!
