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(disobeying) stars
disobeying
the night's
command,
those stars
school
like fish
in fields
of their
earliest
convenience,
they
come hope
from angry
stomping,
they sling
spears at
the earth,
unloading
their hurt
in
the morning's
direction.
the night's
command,
those stars
school
like fish
in fields
of their
earliest
convenience,
they
come hope
from angry
stomping,
they sling
spears at
the earth,
unloading
their hurt
in
the morning's
direction.
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Re. (disobeying) stars
10th Jan 2024 9:45am
W 🤩 O ✨ W!!!
I'm still recovering from how good that was. That was Soo original, I loved it.
I'm still recovering from how good that was. That was Soo original, I loved it.
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Re. (disobeying) stars
Anonymous
10th Jan 2024 12:54pm
Truly thought provoking...
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Re. (disobeying) stars
10th Jan 2024 1:11pm
Great from the title on. I like the column format too. It distills the focus.
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Re. (disobeying) stars
11th Jan 2024 3:45am
I had a visual of stars swirling at night it was beautiful!
Thanks for the night visuals!
<3
Thanks for the night visuals!
<3
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11th Jan 2024 4:12am