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Misty Moments Inbetween
in the passing moments I fade
when you fail to see me I go away
I wanted you to know I carry my thoughts of you with me
cradling the years with the memories
I wanted you to know I desired you
did you desire me?
I gave you my heart
you have the best of me
sadness of heart
a stillness of soul
I tell you honestly
as I caress your doubt with my love
I don't wish to linger in your thoughts as a ghost
who haunts but I do
as the woman you've never held
you have the best of me
sacred melancholy in awe of you
tenderness of being so enamored
you covet my time
it isn't mine to hold
in love with the moment
our first days are as our last
we are one of soul
a union so perfect
not to be disturbed by mortal wants
when I go a piece of you will leave with me
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8th Jan 2024 11:21am
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9th Jan 2024 1:54am
I'm having a very peaceful night thank you! Time to write.
And I hired an aid, I get the whole afternoon to myself tomorrow - have to decide where to haunt, because it's going to be blah rain
And I hired an aid, I get the whole afternoon to myself tomorrow - have to decide where to haunt, because it's going to be blah rain
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8th Jan 2024 1:27pm
beautifully captures the bittersweet essence of unrequited love and longing. Your poem delicately explores the speaker's feelings of fading away when unnoticed by the beloved. It portrays a deep yearning and a desire to be acknowledged and desired in return.
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9th Jan 2024 1:05am
thank you graciously dearest poet for such a lovely review I deeply appreciate it 💕
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8th Jan 2024 2:20pm
This one touches me deeply, brings to mind a pair I recall who drifted apart. The permanence of emotion despite the ending of what was is so strong. Beautifully written, Brenda
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9th Jan 2024 1:07am
hello beautiful Willow you are such a deep soul thank you that you felt this 💕
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8th Jan 2024 10:08pm
Oh lovely, this was beautiful. I love your rough side, but you are a queen of the light emotions, the soft touch, of reaching in your heart and showing the world you are and who you love. This was so good.
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8th Jan 2024 10:23pm
hello beautiful thank you graciously I try to keep my dark side on a leash I don't let it rule...I'm happy you like my gentle side it is more true of my nature...I hope you have a lovely day today 💕
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9th Jan 2024 2:57am
thank you graciously for seeing through to that side of me I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
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