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Breakup
Every time we argue,
you threaten to walk away,
dangling the threat
with a dose of emotional fray.
One day, I'll just depart,
silently, without much talk.
No more blackmail or despair,
just the freedom of my lone sail.
you threaten to walk away,
dangling the threat
with a dose of emotional fray.
One day, I'll just depart,
silently, without much talk.
No more blackmail or despair,
just the freedom of my lone sail.
Published 6th Jan 2024
Author's Note
In "Breakup," I sought to delve into the intricate layers of human relationships, particularly the fragility encapsulated in the threat of separation. The verses unravel the emotional tumult that accompanies the moments of discord, revealing the delicate dance between love and the impending void. As a piece of advice echoed within these lines, it serves as a reminder that threatening to depart can leave lasting scars on the heart. Relationships thrive on understanding, communication, and empathy, and it is my hope that readers reflect on the importance of fostering connection rather than resorting to the potential wounds inflicted by such ultimatums.
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6th Jan 2024 10:18pm
You have captured the essence of a heartbreak with a sense of melancholy.
I am wishing for you to smile and have an upbeat weekend.
I am wishing for you to smile and have an upbeat weekend.
6th Jan 2024 10:25pm
hello dearest poet a great reminder why these ultimatums should never be given💕
