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Home Sweet Home
There she is in all her glory;
Goddess Flora in meaty bloom;
primed for Cupid's inventory
to piston pump the patient womb.
At the sight the heartbeat races
as urges vault by adjunct force,
for pulsation through the paces
of hyperactive intercourse!
Those florid folds of lady love
are the sweetest of all the meats,
as if they came from heaven above
the bakehouse of divine elites...
where Aphrodite's multi-grains
were turned into a pastry blend
of spice, sugar, beauty, and brains...
for a pleasure seeking rear end.
Goddess Flora in meaty bloom;
primed for Cupid's inventory
to piston pump the patient womb.
At the sight the heartbeat races
as urges vault by adjunct force,
for pulsation through the paces
of hyperactive intercourse!
Those florid folds of lady love
are the sweetest of all the meats,
as if they came from heaven above
the bakehouse of divine elites...
where Aphrodite's multi-grains
were turned into a pastry blend
of spice, sugar, beauty, and brains...
for a pleasure seeking rear end.
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Re. Home Sweet Home
29th Dec 2023 4:22am
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29th Dec 2023 4:33am
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29th Dec 2023 4:34am
Re. Home Sweet Home
29th Dec 2023 5:51am
Dear MS,
I enjoyed the metaphors and images you’ve written in this write. Concur with Oral, interesting rhyming pattern. Single line ending is a great focus.
H🌷
I enjoyed the metaphors and images you’ve written in this write. Concur with Oral, interesting rhyming pattern. Single line ending is a great focus.
H🌷
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Thanks H.
I love the challenge of a witty stanza,
and being a dude makes some sort of line climax a mandatory thing:)
Are you ready for the New Year?
I love the challenge of a witty stanza,
and being a dude makes some sort of line climax a mandatory thing:)
Are you ready for the New Year?
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29th Dec 2023 6:07am
Not even close my friend. I’m still in September! But I hope you are and I wish you many blessings and prosperity for 2024!
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29th Dec 2023 6:11am
Well September has always been good to me so I understand not wanting to let go, but I wish the very best for you as well, and look forward to your next write!
Re. Home Sweet Home
29th Dec 2023 1:22pm
Omg! You made the goddess of spring a horn-dog, which makes sense, but then you made the goddesses of love take it in the butt!
Which might also make sense.
Really fun piece.
Which might also make sense.
Really fun piece.
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29th Dec 2023 9:36pm
I was initially inspired by Evelyn De Morgan's 1894 painting of Flora, but then I found "Cosiddetta Flora", seen above.
Then, quite naturally, I fired up my X-ray dude vision toward what lay beneath the draping attire, and let my imagination run wild:)
Then, quite naturally, I fired up my X-ray dude vision toward what lay beneath the draping attire, and let my imagination run wild:)
Re. Home Sweet Home
I agree with betty!
So fun!
You sure "baked" the girls up with this one!
<3
So fun!
You sure "baked" the girls up with this one!
<3
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6th Jan 2024 7:16am
Re. Home Sweet Home
10th Jan 2024 9:01am
Great piece, Sonneteer! I enjoyed the skillful play on words very much. Especially I like the alliteration ' florid folds of lady love'.
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10th Jan 2024 9:33am
Thank you, Sappho!
It totally delights me to hear that, and I can only add that I have always been firmly convinced that there is nothing more rewarding than the...florid folds of lady love:)
It totally delights me to hear that, and I can only add that I have always been firmly convinced that there is nothing more rewarding than the...florid folds of lady love:)