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Your Hair is Not a Brownie
It is said,
that in any relationship
-or even interaction-
between two individuals,
one is the teacher,
and one is the student.
When I told my stylist
of my heat setting of 330 degrees
to flat iron my hair
she said that was fine,
but not to go any hotter.
Brownies bake at 350
she reminded me.
Your hair is not a brownie.
Handing me a mirror
to view my lowlights from the back
she nodded sagely
My own stylist told me that when I was 12.
And now dear reader,
my student,
you have been taught as well.
that in any relationship
-or even interaction-
between two individuals,
one is the teacher,
and one is the student.
When I told my stylist
of my heat setting of 330 degrees
to flat iron my hair
she said that was fine,
but not to go any hotter.
Brownies bake at 350
she reminded me.
Your hair is not a brownie.
Handing me a mirror
to view my lowlights from the back
she nodded sagely
My own stylist told me that when I was 12.
And now dear reader,
my student,
you have been taught as well.
Author's Note
I just couldn't let "Your hair is not a brownie" go to waste.
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Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
23rd Dec 2023 2:29am
Merry Christmas beautiful Pink One
that's too good...I think I will always be the student 💕
that's too good...I think I will always be the student 💕
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Re: Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
23rd Dec 2023 2:39am
Merry Christmas to you too Brenda. I appreciate you.
I'm a lifelong student too.
I'm a lifelong student too.
Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
23rd Dec 2023 2:35am
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23rd Dec 2023 2:37am
Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
23rd Dec 2023 10:29am
That was soooo enjoyable. I thought you were going to say she burned your hair!!! Yeah a comment like that is priceless, lol
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Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
23rd Dec 2023 6:37pm
What a captivating read, oozing originality and authenticity. The tone was authoritive and convincing. Glad I read that. I'm still a fan!
Regards,
BITS
Regards,
BITS
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Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
24th Dec 2023 00:07am
Tho I disagree with "one is teacher, one is student", I'm digging the write! You're catch-phrase deserved a build around it. Great job!
And I hope your hair turned out good!
And I hope your hair turned out good!
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Re: Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
24th Dec 2023 3:06am
Thanks Mark. Curious though- you've never felt like the student sometimes and the teacher sometimes? I don't think it's true of every relationship or interaction, but some.
My hair come out fierce- darkish brown (brownie?) lowlights mixed in with my blonde, and natural er... extra light ash blonde. I'm a little bit in love with myself.
My hair come out fierce- darkish brown (brownie?) lowlights mixed in with my blonde, and natural er... extra light ash blonde. I'm a little bit in love with myself.
Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
31st Dec 2023 2:02am
I laughed so hard I think I peed a little!
Every time I straighten my hair I’m going to hear what I imagine as your voice telling me that my hair is not a brownie.
I’ve missed your writes.
Every time I straighten my hair I’m going to hear what I imagine as your voice telling me that my hair is not a brownie.
I’ve missed your writes.
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Re: Re. Your Hair is Not a Brownie
31st Dec 2023 5:38am
Thanks. I've missed seeing you here. Looking forward to catching up on your new writes. Wishing you a very happy new year!
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20th Jan 2024 3:24pm