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Puling Juliet (what’s in a name)
My back arches
in requiem of
our loss
the only thing
I ever wanted
to be called was…
Yours.
Written by
Betty
Published 21st Dec 2023
Author's Note
For the ‘Name you wish you had’ contest
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Re. Puling Juliet (what’s in a name)
21st Dec 2023 7:48pm
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21st Dec 2023 9:26pm
Re. Puling Juliet (what’s in a name)
21st Dec 2023 10:21pm
hello beautiful this is powerful I always get sad when I hear was
I can imagine the loss of you... damn it...
I can imagine the loss of you... damn it...
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Re. Puling Juliet (what’s in a name)
22nd Dec 2023 00:57am
There’s a real eroticism in this tightly compacted and relatively subtle poem. It expresses a potent physical ache and want between lovers.
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22nd Dec 2023 1:26am
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- Edited 29th Dec 2023 8:45pm
22nd Dec 2023 4:08am
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