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Mommy and Daddy
I made you cry
But you made me want to die
I made you hurt everyday
You hurt me with everything you say
I lied and shunned you from truth
Only cause you keep stealing my youth
I brought your heart a little pain
You never saved me from the rain
I made you disappointed today
And you let me die every day
I'm so sorry I'm not perfect
And I'm sorry I'm not worth it
I'm sorry I didn't come out as planned
And I'm sorry I finally took a stand
But you made me want to die
I made you hurt everyday
You hurt me with everything you say
I lied and shunned you from truth
Only cause you keep stealing my youth
I brought your heart a little pain
You never saved me from the rain
I made you disappointed today
And you let me die every day
I'm so sorry I'm not perfect
And I'm sorry I'm not worth it
I'm sorry I didn't come out as planned
And I'm sorry I finally took a stand
Published 28th Apr 2012
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30th Apr 2012 2:36am
Why the hell are you "sorry I finally took a stand?" I see guilt, "I lied and shunned you from truth." All truth? "Standing up" is your right. No? You have a good poem here. But it is too predictable.
Marcella1
Marcella1
27th Oct 2015 10:11pm
Steady and true to your agenda. Some pushing in places and could have elaborated further... Some tough grammar and double negative. Still a good read. Keep Grindin CAOS737
